links to tracks i left feed on
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?p=2239239
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=196754


"speak up bitch"

http://www.soundclick.com/util/Stre...ID=2569356&q=hi
http://www.soundclick.com/util/Stre...ID=2569356&q=lo
http://www.soundclick.com/util/down....cfm?ID=2569356


This kid Fatal’s a nobody… bitch i'm ill as hell
you'd only live up to your name if you killed yourself
Fatal cmon dawg, You’re to basic to mess wit me
I’m eliminating Fate(al) like i was erasing your destiny

fans want blood… I'm givin em more primitive gore
your body's hittin the floor with every ligament torn
so what you dissin me for? didn't you listen before?
your verses have weak structure like buildings missin a floor

you ain’t bustin the heat, bitch you ain’t nothing to me
you’ll get punched in the cheek for spittin something this weak
you're constantly pausin... don't rush when you speak
cuz your breath control stinks, try brushin yah teeth

I’m never fearin this cat, I’ll shove a spear in his ass
He’s sucks so bad even his family is cheerin for graff
this queer is just whack… your delivery’s so bad
that I should get free pizza just for hearin yah track!

This kids weak as hell, I’m Leavin this silly ho maimed
I mean you gotta be kidding me, are you really so plain?
I’ve seen your text… Your punches are shitty, so lame
While GRaFFiK’s amaze you like high budget video games

Keep thinking yah slick, even winkin at chicks
Whatever floats your boat, but then i'm sinkin your ship
If you’re thinking you’re big then I’m shrinkin you kid
Cuz your style ain’t workin like the link in your sig


kinda rushed but fuck it

tried some new stuff with my flow/delivery too

leave some feedback and things i can work on

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Rapdemon: i can be your groupie of the week!
xGRaFFiK NaTuREx: lol

www.soundclick.com/graffiknature

Am feelin the beat...

Flow was cool, u sound young, punches was there..flow was on and off but overall decent diss

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