[ALL OF THIS IS ME RAPPIN, NOT A COLLAB]


yo, i jus left tha chicken spot wit a chick thats hot//
sumbody hit me on my hip, its Andrew and lil Doc//

[Drew]
we gotta go 2nite pop, hop in ur whip and meet me//
dont forget tha ski mask and wear clothes thats sneaky//

[Takeover]
i replied after "damn its like 2 in tha morn"//
so i hesitated at first, but said "fuck it its on"//
i dropped tha chick off then whipped over 2 mines//
put on some black attire, hoody, and grabbed 2 glock 9's//
i hit Drew "where u at on tha block"// he said

[Drew]
"u need 2 hurry up dun cause we already in front of tha spot"//

[Takeover]
i walked 2 my car, opened tha door//
put tha glocks under tha seat, peeled off and i shifted to 4//
now im thinkin, damn im tired still kinda wired//
off tha shit i was drinkin, these niggaz is buggin//
we suppose 2 run up in this house, rob tha stash from cuzin//
cause in tha streetz his name is long, its 2 much buzzin//
when i got there gave pounds 2 my mans//
"watup Drew watup Doc, who dat in tha back of tha van"//

[Doc]
"thats jus my man Stan, he wanna get down wit tha plan"//

[Takeover]
he cud see i was in a mood//

[Doc]
"dont worry he str8 dude"//

[Takeover]
seen dude hop out tha van lookin real hazey//
eyes red, plus glossy, nigga lookin real shady//
gave him dap, "watup wit u homie"// he said

[Stan]
aint nuthin ock, jus tryin 2 get this and get back on tha block//

[Takeover]
didnt trust him, that nigga wont bust//
u only suppose 2 do this kind of bullshit wit some niggaz u trust//
i said fuck it, we locked up tha whipz//
walked right up tha driveway, and proceeded 2 pull back on tha clipz//
we kicked in tha door yelled "everybody get on tha floor"//
but it was no one 2 be seen jus some bags of that raw//
sofa ripped open like someone already went in tha couch//
"man this shit weird like its a trap set 4 a mouse"//

[Doc]
"naw dog its a coincidence, quit runnin ur mouth"//
"keep quiet and lets jus go search tha rest of tha house"//

[Takeover]
i kept cool, but still hesitant, this shit not seemin right//
i dont know why it was so important that we did this on this night//
we crept up tha stairs, feelin impaired//
cause there was no light in tha house but really all i was feelin was scared//
thinkin a million thoughtz at once, like all of it was a dream//
puttin 2 and 2 together, now im thinkin its all a scheme//
we kicked in a door, all we saw was bodies on tha floor//
tha owner of tha house, wife, kids and blood on tha door//
i said "goddamn sumbody beat us here, wat tha fuck"//

[Stan]
"naw dog u tha one thats bout 2 get fucked"//
"see we already pulled tha crime and we cuttin u outta tha deal"//
"me and these niggaz gotta eat and u aint gettin none of tha meal"//

[Takeover]
i knew this nigga was real shady even my homebyz turned on me//
look of hate in their eyes now tha gunz is turned on me//
i had that look too but now wat cud i do//
raised a gat 2 my "crew" and...(GUNZ BLASTIN)




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Good imagery, like the intensity and lines. Good job 8/10

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