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Old 07-06-05, 11:29 PM   #1
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Da World Goez Round

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Everyone out there is being.................. so hypocritical
When were there so much violence............at a hospital?
Can’t see my hand..................................in this darkness
Can’t understand...................................the sharpness.
Hearing the screams of peoples means that the world is
going down in different means. Politically savaged, morally
raped, the world is fallin in a pitch black fade away.

Shape its in is round so round, but its drowned by all
the raucous sounds
All people do is go on and on, an endless cycle that makes
God yawn. He yearns for believers, wants us to see, but
all we say is “what about me”
Open their eyes, he’ll give a surprise, when it’ll be their
demise, with crying goodbyes.

Open ya minds.........................open ya hearts
close ya pocketbooks......................and hold ya firey darts
Cuz its goin down, the world, like this, fire and brimstone
some kinda ****....
Sayin everyone is hypocrites, maybe that is true, but ya supposed
to follow God, not the man who can fail you.
Closely follow as you swallow, this isn’t a test it’s a choice and follow
through.

Shape its in is round so round, but its drowned by all
the raucous sounds
All people do is go on and on, an endless cycle that makes
God yawn. He yearns for believers, wants us to see, but
all we say is “what about me”
Open their eyes, he’ll give a surprise, when it’ll be their
demise, with crying goodbyes.

Givin ya a chance before the offer is gone, givin ya da word before
the Bible is thrown. No holdin a sign sayin the world is comin to an end
but them crazies know more than PH.d men
No one can say “I’ve been there” different situations,..........
citations, warnings all around follow the signs, destination heaven,
unless you are lost, then be
found.
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Old 07-06-05, 11:58 PM   #2
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this was good, flow and structure were good, another good topic as always, keep it up
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Old 07-07-05, 12:39 AM   #4
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and again good drop......structure was WAY off in ma opinion.....but either way another nice drop...
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