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07-16-05, 01:43 PM | #1 | ||||
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full of a moon...waxing
IP: EE4D 42B7
grinning from ear to ear i can set sail
on the half-moon, ship of this first smile that she is indulging me with. each time i looked into your eyes i saw something that was stolen from me forever ago, but now i know that when GOD set the stage for the first meeting, he made it rain for a reason! fingertips crying because they havent met skin this smooth in years. the silence doesnt mean shes bored or that an odd moment is upon us, it means that we're comfortable as an old coffee table in basement cafes. we belong, which is more than i could ever say for you and yours. im happy with what im doing and all you want to do is find the foundation, pull the block and scream... JENGAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA! you couldnt topple this life with a fucking wrecking ball. HA...so get over the shit and yourself, im sick of hearing how perfect the two of you are because deep down i know that youre wishing like hell it was me, youre trying to push his face into a mask that looks like my reflection. and you, dont crawl back to me once i find someone because i still dont want you. its not a matter of whether im with a girl or not, its a matter of being stabbed in the back with your favorite knife and not realizing that it was even happening. i dont like suprises. her simple style and smiles make me melt like gum on a sidewalk when its 105 degrees outside. im the waning, she the waxing, we complete each other like perfect replicas of each other, meeting to form the full moon of July. |
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07-16-05, 10:04 PM | #2 | |||||||
Artist, that simple
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IP: EE4D 42B7
Really good poetic drop. The metaphors and simile that flow through every line are amazing.....
8.5/10
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