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07-25-05, 02:02 PM
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Artik Phrost Presents:.The World is Not Flat.
IP: 6E69 7B24
For The Topical League...Fate noshowed..So I want Feed!!!
Topic: A New Culture .The Earth Is Not Flat.
by: Artik Phrost ...A Spitting Image With A Tangy After Taste, Lacing Grace; Is All I See And Seem As I Look You In the Face.. ...Flesh Mirrors; Appearance Reflects Ideas Opposite In Distance And I Wonder, 'How Can A Creature Of Imagination Come Into Exsistence?'.. ...My Ignorance Blockades My Curiosity Thriving Throughout Inside Many Questions On The Demension Stepped In, 'How Does This Bend Sight?'.. ...But Through My Insight I Could Tell This Was No Dream; Pure Reality Eyes Saw A Way Of Life Dancing To Uncommon Melodies; Shatterin Previous Actuality.. ...To My Surprise, The World Was No Longer Flat, But Full And Well Rounded A New Culture Sprang Forth To Impregnate Minds And Keep Earth Diverse In Balance.. ...Whats More Impressive; They've Lived Longer Than Any Of Our Guesses Simple Ways Surpass Technical Lessons, So If Technicality Reigns It Need be Corrected.. ...And Their Artifacts Not Only Show History But It Shows Us Art Is Fact Paintings Told How People Ye' Old Grazed Gold...Proving How Much Heart I Lack.. ...Irreguardless That I Will Take Back Knowledge; Understanding Of New Culture And Sleep Well Tonight Knowing That Someone Will Catch Me As The World Turns Over..
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07-25-05, 02:03 PM
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IP: 6E69 7B24
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=201272
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...t=201493&page=3
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07-25-05, 02:12 PM
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Witness, 4 God, 4-Ever
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IP: FA68 D6D8
this was good, flow was good, imagery was pretty good, vocab was good, nice topic, keep it up
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 i come from a time when you earned respect, for your rhyme and the way you made words connect, not the money that you made or the girls you sexed, a concept you obviously haven't heard of yet Mars Ill
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07-26-05, 12:14 PM
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+...Femin-iLL...+
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IP: 6E69 7B24
can i get more feed...i'll gladly return the favor
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07-26-05, 12:49 PM
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IP: 07A8 D079
this a nice topical... you been pullin your weight adapting while RV thinks one style is best, you have a message in your work.. been droppin' work daily and each has good quality..
from this piece i was feeling: ...Whats More Impressive; They've Lived Longer Than Any Of Our Guesses Simple Ways Surpass Technical Lessons, So If Technicality Reigns It Need be Corrected.. ...And Their Artifacts Not Only Show History But It Shows Us Art Is Fact Paintings Told How People Ye' Old Grazed Gold...Proving How Much Heart I Lack.. aight underdog, this type of stuff is why i vote you femcee of the month....
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07-26-05, 12:52 PM
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Above Originality
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IP: D40E 67D5
ayo baby this was ill!!!!!!!!!nice vocab and imagery was feelin the flow nice topic.......RTF on my OM its on my sig holla!!!!!!!!!1
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07-27-05, 09:25 AM
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**the council**
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IP: 1BDA C51C
never actually read one of your drops before but i was really feeling this one......flow was on point and no doubt you came complex with your vocab and your whole style of writing....look forward to seeing more from you.......
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