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07-28-05, 06:59 PM
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-Not On My Level-
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1st Drop (AGAIN)
IP: 0D2F 5926
this is a freestyle...totally off the head....and its my first..so dont be harsh..lol...
Like Common, Im "Something To Be" Im so Gangster, Pussy Chicks Dont Wana "Fuck" With me If Ur A "Star", Then Im a Galaxy Ill End Ur Life, And U Know I Mean This Ur Boi Got More "Shells" than Addidas Hating One Me and Trying To Be Me Is A Lose-Lose Situation Ur Not Who U Say U R, Ur Like Eminem In His Videos, Impersonating U Play Video Games, Thats The Only Way u Know Bout "Action" U And Ur Girl Communicate, So U only Know Bout One Thing Im "Packing" Me And Rap Go Together Like Butter And Toast, Birds Of The Same Feather U and Getting Fried Go Together, Cuz U cant Have One Without The Other Post feedback on wat u think...no hating plz ...... http://community.rapverse.com/showt...37&page=1&pp=15 |
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07-28-05, 07:25 PM
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-Not On My Level-
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IP: 0D2F 5926
uppin this.................................
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07-28-05, 07:38 PM
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-Not On My Level-
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IP: 0D2F 5926
uppin..................positive feedback..........
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07-28-05, 07:57 PM
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-Not On My Level-
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IP: 0D2F 5926
uppin...........................
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07-28-05, 08:16 PM
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-Not On My Level-
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IP: 6C96 7CBB
uppin.........................
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07-29-05, 12:54 PM
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IP: B255 B016
thx....uppin...............
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07-29-05, 12:58 PM
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GeNeRaL
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IP: B376 58AD
not bad but work on your structure and some words didnt rhyme but ok
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07-29-05, 01:06 PM
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-Not On My Level-
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IP: F302 61B9
aiight................uppin...............
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07-29-05, 01:18 PM
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Middle Weight
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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=202138
IP: CF74 5D3A
my link(http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=202138) drop a line or critique
Live double cats give me trouble annoy my styles with Toys and smiles but don’t bother to call talked over swift With my father and all so I feel larger and tall owning a gift WTF street shoot outs, selling too much rifles which leads to Such trifles as drive bys hope this kind of jive dies god we need you If you take money then you’re a fake dummy if you don’t payback Stay whack looking for a hand out all understand what you about just a stray act Last edited by MADDRAPPER : 07-29-05 at 01:21 PM. Reason: add link |
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07-29-05, 01:22 PM
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IP: F302 61B9
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07-29-05, 01:27 PM
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+...Femin-iLL...+
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IP: 6E69 7B24
Ur Boi Got More "Shells" than Addidas
^lol....iight, i see yu for a keystyle...this was pretty clean...slick punches throughout...good job...I wanna see some more from yu....
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07-29-05, 04:12 PM
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-Not On My Level-
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IP: 0034 0667
^thx man.......uppin this......
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07-29-05, 06:28 PM
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Cuz I'm Old Skool Baby
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IP: 042E 9E4C
yeah dis was ok for a quick thing, u had some hot lines tho, like
If Ur A "Star", Then Im a Galaxy and Ur Boi Got More "Shells" than Addidas ^lol that 1 made me laugh, plus adidas shelltoes r my favourite shoe  lolbut yeah, keep droppin!  RTF in either my open mic r battle. peace.
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This is my sig. what? I'm white so u KNOW i can't rap =) I will definitely RTF if u leave a link, thanks! |
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07-29-05, 06:30 PM
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-Not On My Level-
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IP: 6618 2DB7
thx....uppin................................
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