Baby Girl, There Is Some Things Ive Done, And Its Bout Time U Knew
Da Only Reason I Neva Told U Before, Was I Feared For Me And U
I Neva Brought Any Of Those Things U Wear, My Friend Gave me The Money*
I Know Thats Small, But It Gets Worse As I Tell U More Thats Botteled In Me
I Know It Was Wrong Of Me, But Its Time U Knew The Truth
U May Be My Only Girlfriend, But Not the Only Girl Im Talking To**
To Everyone Else That May Sound Odd, But Its Still Not Cool To Do
Member That Day We Made Love In That Bed, I Said There Was Nothing
This Thing Is Pretty Important, It Aint Funny, I Have A Lil Something
I Only Told U A Lil Bit, And Already Ur Thinking Bout Leaving Me
Im Sorry, But Nothing I Say Can Make Up For Giving U HIV
It Was Just So Good, I Couldnt Think Straight, I Jus Went Hard And Nutted
Not Thinkin That We Were Both 14, Jus Bout Love, And U Are Now Pregnant
We Are Jus Going To High School, Im Not Ready To Be A Daddy
I Jus Hope Cuz Of This Revelation, Ur Not mad At Me, But Who Wouldnt Be
I Also Should Have Told U Before, I Love U Now, But I Jus Loved Before Ur Body***
Now Our Parents Hate Us As A Couple, And Think They Can Keep Us Apart
But Nothing, And I Mean Nothing Can Keep Me From What I Want****
But Dont Give In, Or Forgive Me Just Yet, All mainly Because
This Is Jus Part 1 of This Niggas Confessions*****

*-she thinks i brought it with my money....when my friend gave me the money to buy the jewlery she wears...
**-i may go with her...but i am hollaring at other girls....trying to get a lil something....
***-now i love her for her.....before i jus loved her body....
****-no one will keep her from me.....
*****-part 2 and 3 coming as soon as it happens in my real life

positive feedback plz.....real story.......this shit is really happening...i jus neede somewhere to express myself.....


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Pretty deep, flow was off in parts structure was ugly but i like how you expressed yourself,

up the flow and vocab in future.

Not bad!

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