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08-01-05, 12:16 PM
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"Symbolisism"
IP: 0825 899A
Just A Quick Keystyle...
I Wanna Put It On Audio Though... [[Verse One]] Im Lost Ina World... No, No Its More Like A Word... Life. Word Rather Than World... Simply Be-Caus, Uuuuuh, Your Life Surrounds You, Yes. Its An Atmosphere, A Habitat That Now Hasta Veer Down A Road... RoadLess Travled That Holds Down Your Every Step... See, This Is Where I Lay... In That Path Playgued By My Own Motto... No, Not Even A Motto, Not That. Mooooore Like A Word To Live By... By Wich This Installment Of Its Usage Continues To Do This... This Thing, Its All Bent And Twisted... It, It Is My World Being Worded And Grip With A Meaning That Decieves Me To Thinking... "Im Fored To Live This." [[Chorus]] A Symbol A Little Picture That Depicts You, Whats Your Symbol, Your Miss View The You That Not You Its Your Action, Quick Think, Scribble The Image That Depicts Your Passion. [[Verse Two]] This Brings Now To Thought... Uuuuh, Wait, Its A Symbol Not A Word. Now Im Kinda Confused... You See, First A World Then Word Now How A Symbol? Like Symbles Into Me This Epiphany Grabbed Hold, Clapped... So It Must Be Right, Right? Right Away Im Baffled. Tackled By This... Finding... Ya, Its A Finding That Ive Had Hold. So Out Of The Darkness... The DARKEST Hour, Ya... I've Triumphed. Im Unfurled To Self...Self Aware There I Stand An Artist Of My Tounges Thought...Thought...Thought, God, So Clear Here Now Its Got- En Hard To... Well, Its Just Odd How... Well, Here Know My Life By "Dot Dot Dot" ... |
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08-01-05, 02:24 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 3240 794D
not bad, could be better flow wass iffy probally could use better vocab man ur multis were intact good flow i liked this a lot id like to hear it on audio deff. p/m me when you do it iight....good shit 8/10 return the favor
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08-01-05, 02:39 PM
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IP: 0AE0 3B1A
Drop a link homie..or this will be closed
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08-01-05, 04:03 PM
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IP: 3240 794D
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08-01-05, 04:09 PM
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~Real Rookie Of The Year~
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IP: D2FA 539D
This was nice structure was good vocab was good flow was good solid piece here 8/10
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08-01-05, 04:10 PM
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~Real Rookie Of The Year~
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IP: D2FA 539D
BTW rtf "All That I Got Is You"
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08-01-05, 04:48 PM
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Do Re Mi
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IP: FB48 3F52
i liked this piece... the flow was decent it would definetly be better as an audio
i liked the rhyme scheme you used it was different but still did the job overall id give this piece a 8/10 ... definetly not your best but its good return tha favor on my open mic - best ive written
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