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08-03-05, 12:58 PM | #1 | |||||
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my Dreams
IP: 2811 25F9
ok dis is more of a Game flow,did it to Dreams but hey,imma write it like i write fuck writin like
yall holla In august of '90 born into a world of sin/yes i gotta take it back cuz dis is where mah dreams began i must've been a miracle cuz dae said God must've sent ya/no mic in hand when i came outta da womb but plenty of rap scriptures dat i didn't tap into until i understood da picture/it had took a while cuz mah life had needed a few fixtures '93,i dare see the future of an emcee/ daddy smoked a pack or three,which later in dat year contributed to mah bronchitis disease mah dire needs at three,coughin' and whezzin up a storm/mama pregnant again,she made him stop smokin in '94 2 years later,2years in a row-----,you already know...../'96 Pac died...... .........'97 pops died tell me,why change tha pasttime of mah life/everthing that had happen then had given me a new life if for myself i say so/that day 2 days before tha '97 christmas,it had watered the hip hop seed sown in my soul __________________________________________________ ____ 2001 was when dat seed had started grow/.............still a sprout .....................but being fed Miracle gow elevan,and in da 5th grade at the time/had a lil scheme that would turn my rhyming lines into cash lines in 6th grade,i had wrote my first song title/ since girls were all i encounted,.... bitches and hoes it was entitled couldn't hol' a dime but when i did,she had to have a fat behind/but it was dem girls dat were puttin' my rhymes through da shredder to grind 7th grade that all changed more songs, more sense by ear/i was a lyrical prodigy, you could tell by ear 8th grade came and when fast wit no drear/unfol'ing mah career, bout 20 songs i finished dat school year neva cared bout riches,but hopefully they'll come/so i can prove to dem hatas dat Kado is not a chump and i keep rappin,as long as da skies stay blue/dis must be a clue,dat finally mah dreams are comin' true its a few metas hopefully you understood it holla peace
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08-03-05, 01:00 PM | #2 | |||||
Stay out da snow,a blizzards coming
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IP: 2811 25F9
if ders anything yall dont understand don't hesistate to let me know aiight
so i can explain dat shit herd me!!!??? holla
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08-03-05, 01:01 PM | #3 | ||||
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08-03-05, 01:05 PM | #4 | |||||
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IP: 2811 25F9
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08-04-05, 11:58 AM | #5 | |||||
Stay out da snow,a blizzards coming
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IP: 2811 25F9
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can i please dammit get lil respect,atleast yall can do read damn
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08-04-05, 04:07 PM | #6 | |||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 0825 899A
good concept for the topic, lacked good structure.......flow was kinda hard to follow.....multis were good, and rhyme shceme some of lines didnt rhyme.....no hate just stating my opinion.....rtf
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