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Old 08-03-05, 12:58 PM   #1
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my Dreams

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ok dis is more of a Game flow,did it to Dreams but hey,imma write it like i write fuck writin like
yall holla

In august of '90 born into a world
of sin/yes i gotta take it back cuz dis
is where mah dreams began

i must've been a miracle cuz dae said God must've
sent ya/no mic in hand when i came outta da womb
but plenty of rap scriptures

dat i didn't tap into until i understood
da picture/it had took a while cuz mah life had
needed a few fixtures

'93,i dare see the future of an emcee/
daddy smoked a pack or three,which later in dat
year contributed to mah bronchitis disease

mah dire needs at three,coughin' and whezzin
up a storm/mama pregnant again,she made
him stop smokin in '94

2 years later,2years in a row-----,you
already know...../'96 Pac died......
.........'97 pops died

tell me,why change tha pasttime of
mah life/everthing that had happen then had
given me a new life

if for myself i say so/that day 2 days
before tha '97 christmas,it had watered the hip hop
seed sown in my soul
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2001 was when dat seed had
started grow/.............still a sprout
.....................but being fed Miracle gow

elevan,and in da 5th grade at the
time/had a lil scheme that would turn
my rhyming lines into cash lines

in 6th grade,i had wrote my first song title/
since girls were all i encounted,....
bitches and hoes it was entitled

couldn't hol' a dime but when i did,she
had to have a fat behind/but it was dem girls dat were
puttin' my rhymes through da shredder to grind

7th grade that all changed more songs,
more sense by ear/i was a lyrical prodigy,
you could tell by ear

8th grade came and when fast wit
no drear/unfol'ing mah career, bout
20 songs i finished dat school year

neva cared bout riches,but hopefully
they'll come/so i can prove to dem hatas
dat Kado is not a chump

and i keep rappin,as long as da skies
stay blue/dis must be a clue,dat finally
mah dreams are comin' true

its a few metas hopefully you understood it
holla peace
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Old 08-03-05, 01:00 PM   #2
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if ders anything yall dont understand don't hesistate to let me know aiight
so i can explain dat shit herd me!!!???
holla
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Old 08-03-05, 01:01 PM   #3
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Old 08-03-05, 01:05 PM   #4
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wat do you mean its gonna be closed
this is an open mic in the open area
w/e

here:click here
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Old 08-04-05, 11:58 AM   #5
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uuuuuuuuppppppppppiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnn
can i please dammit get lil respect,atleast yall can do
read damn
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Old 08-04-05, 04:07 PM   #6
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good concept for the topic, lacked good structure.......flow was kinda hard to follow.....multis were good, and rhyme shceme some of lines didnt rhyme.....no hate just stating my opinion.....rtf
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