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08-03-05, 11:10 PM
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Unseen Reflection
IP: 2AFF F797
Tweety's Piece
Christianite's Piece The Messanger's Piece Kid Chao's Piece I wander through the valley deciding my mind Why do people act like there's nothing behind? Are they afraid of the truth and hide behind lies, Or are they just trying to pick a winning side? I try to hold my spot till death comes for me, Until then I hold the door open so some can be free. Cuz this door is something, people need to look at, See themselves as they dress with red or blue black gat. Fat and overweight claiming hood mind and structure, But when someone confronts em, their ego ruptures. Spills out their brains and thoughts so all can see, Then they wake up and claim it was all a dream. Hook: For this door is something for everyone to look at, Back in time to see where white people didn't act black. It's a shame to know how life is so judgemental now a days, Anyone can get signed, you just have to be a gangsta rapper today. A hallway leads to the beginning of something amazing, Describing it is nothing and it doesn't give to aging. My job isn't always easy, but the true see what is for what it is, Though inside isn't always clear for those in the biz. It is something that, I think the world needs to see, Believe in the life that God gave to us and praise his glory, A story as old as time, but not something you can say in rhymes, Or else people say "its boring me" and turn to 50 cent lines. Come down my friend, cuz I hold the door open for you, Are you afraid? Well, you have no choice so what are you gonna do? Your turn is now, look into this mirror and tell me what you see, Is it a white boy with red hair and a face full of acne? Or is it a black man with a blue bandana and a NBA hat on, You see nothing? Guess your view of the gat was wrong. Hook For this door is something for everyone to look at, Back in time to see where white people didn't act black. It's a shame to know how life is so judgemental now a days, Anyone can get signed, you just have to be a gangsta today.
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For Anyone Who Wants to Talk to Me  ^^I think this explains my view on gangster rap perfectly. Last edited by The Revelation : 08-04-05 at 01:43 AM. |
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08-04-05, 12:00 AM
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Witness, 4 God, 4-Ever
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IP: EE4D 34B1
liked this, good topic, flow was good, vocab was good, great read overall, keep it up man
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 i come from a time when you earned respect, for your rhyme and the way you made words connect, not the money that you made or the girls you sexed, a concept you obviously haven't heard of yet Mars Ill
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08-04-05, 12:00 AM
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Light Weight
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IP: C294 D0F2
Good piece, liked it all, flow and everything was straight 8/10.
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 Sig Provided by: Christianite 3 nails + 1 cross = 4given No matter how good you are there's always someone better. I'm not the status quo stereotype you want me to be. |
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08-04-05, 01:51 AM
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IP: 0AE0 3B1A
Word..you used this in the battle..your recycling!..lol just playing..but yeah man this was a tight drop..your structure was on point..you had a nice hook...wordplay and vocab usuage was pretty good...you had alot of feeling and emotions going into your peice..and i really liked that..shows me you took time out of your day to make this drop..and i thank you for that..
drop feedback on Heaven vs Hell in my sig please
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08-04-05, 11:16 AM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 3240 794D
this was tight i liked it a lot good emotion for real, nice flow to it becuz of ur good structure....up on vocab .......and ur multis were ok, please rtf on my om in my sig..thanks
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08-04-05, 08:39 PM
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GG Haterz
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IP: 2049 8852
Upping for feed.
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For Anyone Who Wants to Talk to Me ^^I think this explains my view on gangster rap perfectly. |
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08-05-05, 11:04 AM
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GG Haterz
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IP: 9B8D 2566
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For Anyone Who Wants to Talk to Me ^^I think this explains my view on gangster rap perfectly. |
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