Hearin ur name echoin in my brain drives
me clinically insane, leaves my heart
broken and pieces layin
On the floor, dirty like before, you
stole it, broke it, now you want more
I hear you sayin, never happened, blamin
it all on me, that’s what ur shoutin, now
I hear you voice clearly, you’ll be
the death of me I’m weary.

All the hate inside I give to God, but
I still wish you could see what I’ve
shed, I’ve shed my old life, shed some
tears, shed some attitudes, put away
all my fears, now I’m back to square
one again, with a new slate again
will we ever be friends? Who’s
to say this won’t mend?

In the beginning u started it or did I?
Either way it happened, I cannot say
that’s a lie. You pushed me away,
and there was nothing I could
say, now your back again saying
that you’ve changed. Won’t work
this time, no no, moved on, I’ve got
a better thing goin now, its time you’ve
learned, that when things are handed to you
you just take them, don’t judge them
for face value, just embrace them.

All the hate inside I give to God, but
I still wish you could see what I’ve
shed, I’ve shed my old life, shed some
tears, shed some attitudes, put away
all my fears, now I’m back to square
one again, with a new slate again
will we ever be friends? Who’s
to say this won’t mend?

Past is past, but memories remain, like
PARK said, once the paper’s crumpled up
can’t b perfect again, favorite line, you
know that’s mine, u deny it every time
but the history of us is there, I see that
ur lyin.


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this was good, emotion was very good, flow was good, liked everything in this, keep it up

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3 nails + 1 cross = 4given
No matter how good you are there's always someone better.
I'm not the status quo stereotype you want me to be.

VOCAB was tight MULties were tight structure was a bit off lol but still copped a good flow 6/10 keep it up do ya thing keep elevatin and shit......rtf please