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mizz fyre | 5 | 100.00% | |
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08-23-05, 06:38 PM | #1 | |||
Poet's Daughter.
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mizz fyre vs .Lola Cruez. II
IP: E2F9 A45B
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20-30Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting explain ya votes vote on all topical aspects no hopesfall votes (anyone trying out for your crew) Topic- Dear Summer Minimum posts to vote: 400 Check in by: 08-23-05 at 07:08 PM Must drop verse in 8640 minutes after check in. |
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08-23-05, 06:39 PM | #2 | ||||||
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IP: 02E7 8E4D
mizz fyre has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-23-05 06:39 PM.
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08-23-05, 06:53 PM | #3 | ||||||
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IP: E2F9 A45B
.Lola Cruez. II has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-23-05 06:53 PM.
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08-28-05, 12:16 PM | #4 | |||
**the council**
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IP: FF34 1353
Dear summer......
Screams invade the hospital silence, my mind capturing every emotion The notion of caring for you was too much and I couldn’t feel devotion Your daddy called you summer, I asked him why, he had many reasons He said that you were so beautiful and we would be the family of seasons Outside the night air took my breath, I looked down and realised your beauty Wrapped in your pink satin blanket, I thought about winter doing his duty My eyes were burning, I bundled you into the car, it was getting colder Daddy whispered “someone’s mad” then tenderly tapped me on my shoulder The drive seemed so long, we’re inseparable, my hand intertwined with yours Pauses that your sounds fill, daddy looking back before he entered the stores The windows presenting opportunities, but your now my main, only priority I look down at your sweet face, can’t even envision myself showing authority In the distance I can see the ocean, on its glassy surface the sun is glistening “Are we close to home yet”, you turn around but it seems you’re not listening Accelerating fast, your so close to the gates that protect its outer appearance I look up to the sky, pray for you summer, that your dad will give us clearance we plunge into the water, your in my arms, I hide your face against my chest Victims to the depths, but I refuse to go like this, swimming, I head west Your little body feels limp and lifeless, I keep asking myself, is she dead your daddy’s floating on the surface, with tears I struggle to carry on ahead Finally we reach dry land, I look at your beautiful face, your mouths blue Convinced that your dead, I reach in my pocket, and cut my wrist through People gather around, they try desperately to safe you, I hear you sigh I try to get up, but I’m paralysed, death is one power I’m unable to defy With the knowledge that you survived, I relax, to your saviours hand I cling Leave you with my last words, what will the world do without autumn and spring?…….
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