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::.Dead Thinker.::
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My obessesion with pencil'd sentences is relentless. Progression in mental bliss, painting images unfinished. Stretching the canvas's worth beyond the blank start. Pain sparks the same scars that tore wars apart. Homicidal tendencies lay deep in, soul engulfed In uncontrolable dreams with trees blowing A brisk breeze.. Sharp enough to show a glowing Wrist bleed.. Risked grief and it cost my tears. Lost in mirrors.. Reflect on a complex poem of fears. Shorten the years and appear sincere, while dead. A smile fed me awhile, regret left me with style. Learned survival tactics that outlasted being idle. Zero opinions and heros unmentioned in history. Visions see misery.. An unblemished mystery. As whispers creep across the old floor boards. Cold wars form in the bloody sands off shore. Till the force of waves pushes days to change Their ways.. Blue the grays and shade the blanks. Flame the rain and watch earth dirts soak Provoked droplets of nonsense.. Choke On narcotics with every emotion held hostage. Spill oxygen beneath the pen sending ink out. Think shouts and seek out and bleek route To the deep clouds. Scream sounds at cowards In supreme crowds.. Leave crowns shattered And tattered in pastures of past hurt and vast Words.. Wrath birthed every last verse. Grasp dirt and clutch such a touch it paints A faint beauty.. Tainted purity is serisouly The riskest thing since trying to blink and read. Think then fed thoughts, leave blocks Mishaped and out of place like ticktocks on A Stop, Watch me take over.. make clovers With 5 fingers, Shove the kinfe deeper then The midnight thoughts of dead thinker.
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Drop a link or this will be closed
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IP: 5285 DC82
wow
you fucks laove to give feed ae?
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Shit..
That was a fuckin' ill drop man. The flow is crazy, i's just an enjoyable read. The vocab was ill, and the message in the writting was just sick. Very dope OM man, good drop. Lot of props. |
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good flow nice multis vocab was good this was a sold drop no doubt buuuuuuuuuuuuuuump
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Thanks for the feedback but fuck I a getting slept on.
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IP: 2029 97B3
ill admit dat was a dope drop but people this site dont like people who seem 2 love themselves so 2 say on here they want ya 2 ride there dick's shit dont get caught wit them bitches keep droppin
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what the fuck are you on about? thankyou kind sir for that very interesting peice of feedback.
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