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Old 10-17-05, 03:24 AM   #16
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Voted For: Reflekt

Districk
u neva get a bitch..n if you do..you'd stil have to try 'n dodge-a codemning
cos wit chicks..u "score" nothing like little leaguers against roger clemens
decent, scores overused tho
the pleasure you get is when you slap your cocks at ur boys 'n bust
& as for ur mom?...we all get to "rubber" more than the stocks at toys'r'us
lmao, good werdplay
it's like chinese up in here..wit all the "hu's" when we ask for u around
cos all of rhymes lack "interest" worse than some closed bank accounts
played
ur name ain't profound....it's garbage..I bet i'd find better on the rack
cos just lookin at ur rhymes is how'd you "reflekt" on what's whack
eh..close attempt at a nameplay

Decent verse, some good werdlplay and some good lines.. wasnt feelin 1 or 2 of 'em tho.. Stay Up.

Reflekt
I'm tired of all these ho's coming at me. A bunch of misfits
So I'm resloving RV's newb problem by murdering 'dis trick'
good nameplay n werdplay
You got a hard time thinking? Can't come up with 12 lines?
I'll still deliver this kids L(letter), like it was mail time.
eh.. who calls letters "L's" .. not feelin
Now entertainers I can't stand em'. So know that I might rip
James. Just so you can say that I 'dist'(diced) 'rick'*
I think you meant dissed.. if so, good werdplay
And I question where you're from. But don't get all soft and mushy
From between a girls legs? Funny. The last thing I remember there was a pussy**
Haha, solid personal

Good verse. Funny nameplays and good werdplay packed with a tough personal. Overall a well balanced verse. Good Job.

V/ Reflekt, overall a better verse.
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Old 10-17-05, 03:27 AM   #17
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Old 10-17-05, 07:26 AM   #18
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Voted For: Reflekt

checkin the polzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz


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Old 10-19-05, 02:22 AM   #19
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Reflekt

I'm tired of all these ho's coming at me. A bunch of misfits
So I'm resloving RV's newb problem by murdering 'dis trick'
Didn't connect..
You got a hard time thinking? Can't come up with 12 lines?
I'll still deliver this kids L(letter), like it was mail time.
Forced.. Nobody would know what you were talking about if you would have left it with the L.. therefore making it forced because you had to explain..
Now entertainers I can't stand em'. So know that I might rip
James. Just so you can say that I 'dist'(diced) 'rick'
Forced again.. Dissed and diced don't sound anything a like..
And I question where you're from. But don't get all soft and mushy
From between a girls legs? Funny. The last thing I remember there was a pussy
Nah.. didn't connect..

[i]Districk[/b]

u neva get a bitch..n if you do..you'd stil have to try 'n dodge-a codemning
cos wit chicks..u "score" nothing like little leaguers against roger clemens
Decent..
the pleasure you get is when you slap your cocks at ur boys 'n bust
& as for ur mom?...we all get to "rubber" more than the stocks at toys'r'us
Didn't connect..
it's like chinese up in here..wit all the "hu's" when we ask for u around
cos all of rhymes lack "interest" worse than some closed bank accounts
Decent..
ur name ain't profound....it's garbage..I bet i'd find better on the rack
cos just lookin at ur rhymes is how'd you "reflekt" on what's whack
Haha. This was pretty cool..

Overall, Refleckt had a lot of forced punches because of the wordplay, and a lot of punches that just didn't connect, whereas Districk had a few decent punches and one good one, because his concepts were better and his wordplay was laid out and not so forced. That's what separated these two in this battle, and because Districk had the better overall verse I'm going to give him my vote.

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Old 10-22-05, 04:21 PM   #20
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Bizzo and Implicit are rekelt...LoL @ that nigga trying to get ahead of the polls like that.

And don't even try and say that it wuz a mistake.
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Old 10-23-05, 09:27 AM   #21
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would vote but you dont rtf.

polss.............
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Old 10-23-05, 11:18 AM   #22
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would vote but you dont rtf.

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considering that you have me blacklisted......how can I?
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Old 10-23-05, 11:25 AM   #23
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I didnt say you....

and i dont think i have...

howd i take you off if i put you on?
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Old 10-23-05, 11:29 AM   #24
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As Districk,I wouldn't be able to vote on any of the battles in ya sig becuz of the # of posts.

And blacklist options is in User Cp
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Old 10-28-05, 11:14 AM   #25
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Old 11-01-05, 06:26 PM   #26
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Old 02-09-06, 07:33 PM   #27
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Voted For: Reflekt

Opener: Reflekt
Closer: Reflekt
Punches: Reflekt (he crushed Districk in that department)
Personals: Reflekt "
Creativity: Reflekt
Complexity: Reflekt
Enjoyment: Reflekt

Vote: Reflekt
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Old 11-30-06, 02:50 AM   #28
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uppin this battle. come on yo dont sleep on this...
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Old 12-03-06, 05:12 PM   #29
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Voted For: Districk

Vote For This Dude I Mean He Kept It Funky Threw This Whole Verse....Punches Were Pretty Good Edged Out The Other Cats Punches Structure Was Flawless Kept It In Order Threw The Whole Verse....

Vote=Districk

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Old 12-13-06, 02:06 AM   #30
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Voted For: Reflekt

Reflekt, has personals and came with a good flow, and a few good bars...

Not to take ne thing away from Distrikt...he came with it aswell...but he lacked real personal punches/n good wordplay...which Reflekt did...

good battle to the both of you...much better then 3/4's of the other shitty battles in this forum
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