This is where im goin to drop my verses for will appear so she can help me and hopefully git into C.S.



u thought u could take me and cashmoney at tha same time?
bitch you couldnt even beat a pre-schooler wit them rymez
hypnosis wouldnt even help you win against me
i'd still beat you with tha quickest of quick keys*
lets git it poppin so you can expierience your loss son
this battle is like omarion goin up againt big pun
you set it fo a 30 minute drop cuz you want a quick loss
you aint gittin head cuz there aint no salad to toss
my rymez are demonic and jus straight insane
im catch fire quick cuz im flammable like propane

Explanations

*his kept sayin that he wanted to do a quick key against me

that last line,in other wordz i start to good real fast like how a fire startz fast wen it meets with propane

note that i was done in 4 minutez or less...wack ass shit




^^^this was against hipnotik...it was my 1 loss...i closed tha battle...thats tha first one willa

u thought u could take me and cashmoney at tha same time?
bitch you couldnt even beat a pre-schooler wit them rymez
1st line not taht bad but the 2nd was filler all played
hypnosis wouldnt even help you win against me
i'd still beat you with tha quickest of quick keys*
not good lol
lets git it poppin so you can expierience your loss son
this battle is like omarion goin up againt big pun
not good
you set it fo a 30 minute drop cuz you want a quick loss
you aint gittin head cuz there aint no salad to toss
my rymez are demonic and jus straight insane
im catch fire quick cuz im flammable like propane
last line was ok

ok tonight write a verse against me 8- 16 lines i want atleast 4 good personals in it

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ayo you ask me what more could i ask for?*
all i ask is for sum1 who can actually help me elevate more
i know that cant be you cuz in text your 0-0
your not good enuff anyways to be my hero
when i dissin you there aint no peace,only chryme**
this would be your first loss but it wouldnt be tha last time
when i hear tha name will appear,i think not thats an ass***
look at rookie of the month,my name will appear cuz i shattered you easier than glass****


Personal
*her sig says "what more could you ask for"
**her sig also says that wheres there chryme,theres peace
***her avvy says now thats an ass
****jus nameplay basically...will appear

uppin fo will appear to look at this...last line is very stretched but oh well im tryin really hard...hit me up wit tha feedback and lemme know wen u need more battle linkz or verses from battlez...i can give them to ya...hit me bak

ayo you ask me what more could i ask for?*
all i ask is for sum1 who can actually help me elevate more
ok good multis in this ok personal what would you do if i changed my sig?
i know that cant be you cuz in text your 0-0
your not good enuff anyways to be my hero
not a very good line
when i dissin you there aint no peace,only chryme**
this would be your first loss but it wouldnt be tha last time
good personal in the first line but the last is playedc
when i hear tha name will appear,i think not thats an ass***
look at rookie of the month,my name will appear cuz i shattered you easier than glass**** i liked this line the best pout out of all of them it was kinda creative
today come up with 4 lines that are creative jsut 4 lines sit down and think abotu wordplay and metafores cause u have flow multis

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iight ill have it by this afternoon cuz im in school right now...thanx for tha feed

alright kid im waiting for you lol

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sry...my comp was down...ill have it by tommorrow...hit me bak

iight 4 nice linez,lets see

you being on tha top reminds me of lepercauns*
they should call me the baker cuz im made of cinnamon bons(buns)**
me rappin is nicer than christmas presents being given***
i get on tha mic an people think that biggie is still livin****

Explanations

*lepercauns are short so her being on tha top will be a short time
**bakers make cinnamon buns and they are HOT and FRESH(git it,my rymes are hot and fresh)
***rappin and wrappin...like you wrap a present,and itz nice to give presents...nice to give and then nice as in my skillz...git it?
****it would be a MIRACLE if biggie would still livin...itz a miracle when i git on tha mic

uppin fo feed from willa...hit me bak

cool not bad at all i like it now battle someone and use ur wordplay

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http://community.rapverse.com/showb...471408&posted=1

^^^the battle link...theres only 2 personals...sry...and like 1 line of wordplay(i think)...check it out and lemme know...hit me bak

Uppin!!!!!!!!!!

he in TTI now...what a impatient fuck...

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