Laying It down

Rap to a nation of fools then make adaptations to schools like
Students, crap situations rules, such as homework I’m the cool type
Like economic aid my Ebonics paid for my success in this mess//
Ride bikes like Dennis Hopper, diminish a chopper just no contest //
Try be proper like an author add index to books then take a complex
Look at pages with suicidal tittles it societal just to keep folks vexed //
Its bad being a thug and whack so I learned to add and subtract
Now like mathematicians on a path with mission but love the club’s act //
Rhyme from my mind sway but like a fine day add pleasures
To picnics with design treasures to lick chicks in mad measures //
Ok the figures are complete too many cats triggers in streets
Cause crime and deaths it’s time to test, will the laws sweep
The dirt then will they speak and alert us of danger zones?
Rangers gone use to patrol territories mischief lingers on //
Some cats have the type features that are like teachers
Accept no excuse but help the youth step to the truth creature
Try hold them down they come bold to town so we recruit preacher //
This low saga is a riot like an Ohsawa’s diet must increase fish
And vegetable wish for incredible muscles able to feast crisp //

this is more like an open mic riddled with multis then a poem
but it was decent... try focusing less on rhymes, more on emotion
and painting a picture for the reader and youll have something

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