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Oreo 2 28.57%
Daubs 5 71.43%
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Old 10-09-05, 05:38 PM   #16
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good job oreo anyone who had to write 500 barz and still found tim t drop deserves props good job i luiv u
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Old 10-09-05, 05:49 PM   #17
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500 bars?....................................

Safe big, thanks fgor the vote.
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Old 10-09-05, 07:48 PM   #18
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yea he got a deal he had to make 3 songs in 3 days and one was a 30 min song with 1000 lines lol
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Old 10-10-05, 12:04 AM   #19
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good looking out...yeah i was brain dead when it came to this but r.v. dont care bout other shit so i aint say nothing ya feel me lol i love you too willapear lol
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Old 10-10-05, 10:40 AM   #20
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well props then

you got a link to your audios??
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Old 10-10-05, 11:56 PM   #21
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not yet..they are still cds on my producer shelf..i dont listen to my music after i drop...when i get links though ill make sure you get some
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Old 10-11-05, 07:17 AM   #22
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yeh i wanna hear some of your music aswell....

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Old 10-11-05, 07:31 AM   #23
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nice battle fam... uppin on this nuggaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
 
Old 10-11-05, 01:54 PM   #24
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Old 10-11-05, 02:11 PM   #25
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Voted For: oreo

oreo-

oreo the wizard of oz, daubs he tin-man he needs heart
put your brain on the road so you can get street smart
^^^GOOD SET UP,BUT AS U KNOW DAT PUNHLINES IS SUPER PLAYED
couldnt spit flames so the raps he spit cant burn apart
daubs couldnt explode on a track if he was dale earnhart
^^^LOL DOPE SHIT
i knock grouppie hoes while you sit back and deal with foes
deepest you ever been in the streets was sitting in pot holes
^^UHH NEVA SEEN DIS...ITS OKAY
you walk around wearing more crosses then vampire slayers
and love to do more tricks with your "balls" then and 1 players
^^^NAH
on the corner all day and you still a broke joke of a hustler
r.v. could rent movies from Daubs, hes a true block buster
^^^LOL DOPE CLOSER...HE REALLY IS THO


daubs-
Its no suprise he gets slept on, in the business of catering
Cos he wont oreop(hurryup) and elevate,we're tired of waiting
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^^^CATERING & WAITIN DONT RYHME...AND WHUT WITH DA LINE SHIT?
Im bad n your dope, na its just that your dope is my bad
But oreos punches are red raw.....when he dye's hands
^^^????RED RAW
Oreo's unedible....Yeah, Cookies get ate..not blow jobs
N he aint bien praised when he steps on the stage & the show stops
^^^DECENT
Even if my punches miss, they still explosive...like i landmine
but your watch is over your fists...like ya punches are behind time
^^^WACK...TIME PUNCHLINES R PLAYED
Like overdosers,ima leave this wackness destroyed with ease
And its only the druggies of RapVerse...that enjoy t'cook-E's
^^^I REALLY DIDNT GET IT
Oreo's all talk,he just wont do it like nike immitations
And he blamed record lows on his CD sales on diskriminations
^^^A FAKE PERSONAL
Your fully beat, like playing completed instrumentals
But the only thing you spit outa ya mouth is ya dentals
^^^ZZZZZ WHERE'S YA CREATIVITY?
When RV shouts O'shit...there laughin at you not with you
And he thought the onlyway to take out dubs..was reducin the volume
^^^DOESNT RYHME
When i say he's diss=played,im not talkin about fixin the net
And he's longing for the Win....and still hasnt reached a vet
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^^^VERY SIMPLE..REALLY DIDNT LIKE IT
He the only person to crash partys...before they even started
And Oreo's aren't clubs......but still his skills have partied (clubs are a biscuit too)
^^^PARTY IS PRONOUNCED..PAR-DEED.....STARTED IS PRONOUCED STAR-DID....NOW DOES DAT RYHME? NO


V/OREO..4 NOT FORCIN SHIT 2 RYHME AND 4 HAVE A DECENT PUNCHLINE
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Old 10-11-05, 06:09 PM   #26
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it might not rhyme in your accent, english and american is different you prick.

Cant believ you still hatin from when i voted against you.

grow up fag.

cookE = cookies you dumbshiut not gettin that either.
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Old 10-11-05, 06:31 PM   #27
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suck my dick u homo i voted fairly stop cryin u lil bitch boy
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Old 10-12-05, 09:00 AM   #28
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Voted For: oreo

oreo the wizard of oz, daubs he tin-man he needs heart
put your brain on the road so you can get street smart
4....needed a decent,relevant set-up IMO to hit harder.
couldnt spit flames so the raps he spit cant burn apart
daubs couldnt explode on a track if he was dale earnhart
6....good,I like this one.
i knock grouppie hoes while you sit back and deal with foes
deepest you ever been in the streets was sitting in pot holes
5....decent
you walk around wearing more crosses then vampire slayers
and love to do more tricks with your "balls" then and 1 players
3...relating ball wit sports and gay is played out.
on the corner all day and you still a broke joke of a hustler
r.v. could rent movies from Daubs, hes a true block buster
5....good.

Its no suprise he gets slept on, in the business of catering
Cos he wont oreop(hurryup) and elevate,we're tired of waiting
2...forced wordplay...oreop sounds nothing like hurry up.
Im bad n your dope, na its just that your dope is my bad
But oreos punches are red raw.....when he dye's hands
1.....red raw?..i ain't feelin it.
Oreo's unedible....Yeah, Cookies get ate..not blow jobs
N he aint bien praised when he steps on the stage & the show stops
3...stage shit is kinda blah now.
Even if my punches miss, they still explosive...like i landmine
but your watch is over your fists...like ya punches are behind time
3...see the concept your trying to pull off...but u worded it bad..
Like overdosers,ima leave this wackness destroyed with ease
And its only the druggies of RapVerse...that enjoy t'cook-E's
6...yea...nice bar
Oreo's all talk,he just wont do it like nike immitations
And he blamed record lows on his CD sales on diskriminations
3...bah...don't think Oreo has a Cd out...this is borderline fake personal.
Your fully beat, like playing completed instrumentals
But the only thing you spit outa ya mouth is ya dentals
3...liked the 1st line,2nd was played.
When RV shouts O'shit...there laughin at you not with you
And he thought the onlyway to take out dubs..was reducin the volume
5...decent
When i say he's diss=played,im not talkin about fixin the net
And he's longing for the Win....and still hasnt reached a vet
4...decent
He the only person to crash partys...before they even started
And Oreo's aren't clubs......but still his skills have partied
3...wuzn't feelin this,sorry.

Ok..well,daubs went more lines.But overall...he came weaker IMO.

Daubs..
That oreop like...forced wordplay..because it doesn't match sllyably.Always go through ur wordplay to make sure it matches sllyably.And then..wtf is red raw?..And u had a line talkin bout oreo's record sales..'n i doubt oreo has a record out in stored right now..and if he did..he wouldn't be here..so that bar was a fake P.And also...u spoke 'bout cookies a lot when that's played..and so is the spit/dentals line.

U spit waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay better in ya battle against me..

Oreo....
Some of ur set-ups need more relevance.Only bar that kinda sucked for u was the ball one...as everyone knows gay is played.So whenever u got a gay line..always make sure it's mad creative..cos chances are...it's been done before.

So....MY HONEST OPINION..is.......

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Old 10-12-05, 10:39 AM   #29
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thanks for feed.

hurry up = urryup in my accent...so it works for me.
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Old 10-12-05, 11:05 AM   #30
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Voted For: oreo

Daubs:

Its no suprise he gets slept on, in the business of catering
Cos he wont oreop(hurryup) and elevate,we're tired of waiting
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^^weak opener 3/10
Im bad n your dope, na its just that your dope is my bad
But oreos punches are red raw.....when he dye's hands
^^ehh 4/10
Oreo's unedible....Yeah, Cookies get ate..not blow jobs
N he aint bien praised when he steps on the stage & the show stops
^^decent 5/10
Even if my punches miss, they still explosive...like i landmine
but your watch is over your fists...like ya punches are behind time
^^ok 4/10
Like overdosers,ima leave this wackness destroyed with ease
And its only the druggies of RapVerse...that enjoy t'cook-E's
^^good bar ok meta 6/10
Oreo's all talk,he just wont do it like nike immitations
And he blamed record lows on his CD sales on diskriminations
^^ehh 4/10
Your fully beat, like playing completed instrumentals
But the only thing you spit outa ya mouth is ya dentals
^^blah 3/10
When RV shouts O'shit...there laughin at you not with you
And he thought the onlyway to take out dubs..was reducin the volume
^^ok 4/10
When i say he's diss=played,im not talkin about fixin the net
And he's longing for the Win....and still hasnt reached a vet
^^ok 5/10
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He the only person to crash partys...before they even started
And Oreo's aren't clubs......but still his skills have partied
^^ok 4/10

Overall: 42/100 (42%)


Oreo:

oreo the wizard of oz, daubs he tin-man he needs heart
put your brain on the road so you can get street smart
^^played concept ok opener 4/10
couldnt spit flames so the raps he spit cant burn apart
daubs couldnt explode on a track if he was dale earnhart
^^good meta nice punch 6/10
i knock grouppie hoes while you sit back and deal with foes
deepest you ever been in the streets was sitting in pot holes
^^ok 4/10
you walk around wearing more crosses then vampire slayers
and love to do more tricks with your "balls" then and 1 players
^^kinda gay 3/10
on the corner all day and you still a broke joke of a hustler
r.v. could rent movies from Daubs, hes a true block buster
^^ok 4/10

Overall: 21/50 (42%)

Daubs came alright here but he has alot of just ok bars but Oreo won this with more witty meta's cuz basically no one threw any punches.

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.
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