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10-25-05, 05:43 PM
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Warpaint..
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check it..
i got a lil into the production now... http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pag...fm?bandID=82331 drop feedback 1nE relpyd to UNF "im real" and ike's screw your prize
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10-26-05, 02:20 AM
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wow im guessing nobody likes you. you aint get no responses
thast my beat. lol. lovin the beat voice is real interesting. but boring. put more emotion into it. lyrics weren't great but not bad. it was in the middle. pretty good actually flow was somewhat on point. but it fell off a few times. quality wasn't too good. i could hear pops. rtf in my siggy. |
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10-26-05, 05:19 PM
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IP:
thx man..
i hit up 2 of urs 1ne
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10-26-05, 06:08 PM
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real bad quality the flow was off not much more to say can't rly hear ya verse well 7/10 because u didn't put any real heart and soul into the music so i wasn't feelin it and could barely hear ya rap no offense just amp them vocals a bit
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10-26-05, 06:11 PM
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Ike
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IP:
ok listening....ive always loved this beat........
the way you started out on the track wasnt effective...you gotta learn to come in nice....cause just coming in nice can make the whole verse seem dope... as the verse progresses....your presence goes away....you can barely even hear your voice as the song gets further into it......at the beginning your presence is ok.....but you gotta work on staying consistent with it.....act mad at the mic...and stay with the same voice/ delivery throughout the whole song...... just work with that for now....keep elevating.....word
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10-26-05, 06:31 PM
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IP:
to true man ^^
thx for the feed
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