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Old 11-25-05, 09:12 AM   #16
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Old 11-26-05, 07:26 AM   #17
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Alright good poem. Liked the imagery so vivd and quiet, but nice description. Emotion was nice, concept alright the creativity you brought it up with is decent and kept e readng. keep writing.
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Old 11-27-05, 02:09 AM   #18
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damn this is a good one....one of your best in my opinion......keep dropin them hot shits!!
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Old 11-30-05, 02:46 PM   #19
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nicce poem ........... ending could be better you know but good job.......
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Old 11-30-05, 02:47 PM   #20
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read mine ok it is called "have you ever" GANGSTA KIM..........
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