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Old 10-30-05, 03:29 PM   #31
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The intro was hilarious. But anyways onto your song..

The beat was cool. I'm sure it would bump with a system. The flow was nice. Didnt fall of or anything. Your mic presence was felt. You spit it nice. Your lyrics were cool. Some were definantly better than others. Your George Bush and Jetson lines were my favorite. Just a tight track dog. I enjoyed it


thanx famz i really appreciate that..

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Old 10-30-05, 03:32 PM   #32
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Intro: Dooms... get at me for one of them right thurr!!!! Feeling the intro... he was on some DJ kayslay / papoose shyt...lol

Beat: Grimy... just how i like 'em...

1st verse... simple lyrics... kinda like when i did my Brooklyn joint but on a different flow... up ya quality on ya verse to Doom's level cuz it definitely sounded different between the two... words were clear... just soundy ..iono... ashy?... almost raspy like....

Hook:... too much coulda been done with this for you to settle for that... get creative with ya hooks... they connect ya verses and add life to ya tracks

2nd Verse: same as the first... safe track... especially if that's what they into in ya hood... do you man.... stay up

decent overall... 7/10

ehhh and that's not a lisp y'all hearing... it's da hiss in his track... just needs to compress and de-ess that shyt ... that all
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Old 10-30-05, 03:46 PM   #33
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iight, let's see........

intro- iwas definitely feelin it....... i don't know why......

1st verse- iight, flow was too uptight, u sound like u practiced too long instead of havin fun with it........ nice voice, u sorta sound like Juelz Santana........

2nd verse- wasn't really feelin your actual lyrics as much....... sounded like it flowed better than the 1st, but rhymes were so-so..........

overall- 7.5/10........ good beat, good intro....... uptight flow and sorta simple rhymes got u tho.......
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Old 10-30-05, 03:57 PM   #34
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lol @ practiced...word up..thanx for feedback.

and again. i know about. the hook. im going to change that up.

and apexx has good equipment..i have a mic and a sock

and its hard to cram lines in there. i think i had decent lines. because it wasnt a lyrical track. you wanna hear some shit. I might let ya'll peep the intro for my album. thats some lyrical shit
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Old 10-30-05, 04:03 PM   #35
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Thanx Homie. and fo sho. i just gotta fux around with that Hook and it shuld be a wrap. and big ups on that intro. i asked for an intro that got everyone hyped up and ready for the track. and you gave me even more than that. respect



Oh yeah man, you know how we do it. Go hard or go home, lol. But yo, when the final version is finished, send me a copy of the file. I'm working on another project that you'd definitely be interested in.
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Old 10-30-05, 04:04 PM   #36
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Thanx Homie. and fo sho. i just gotta fux around with that Hook and it shuld be a wrap. and big ups on that intro. i asked for an intro that got everyone hyped up and ready for the track. and you gave me even more than that. respect



oh yeah man, you know how that goes. I go hard or go home, and you def murked the monkey shit outta the beat. But yo, as soon as you get the finalized copy, shoot me the file. I'm working on something you're definitely gonna be interested.
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Old 10-30-05, 04:06 PM   #37
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oh yeah man, you know how that goes. I go hard or go home, and you def murked the monkey shit outta the beat. But yo, as soon as you get the finalized copy, shoot me the file. I'm working on something you're definitely gonna be interested.


alright homie. Will Do. thanks again famz
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Old 10-30-05, 04:07 PM   #38
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I'm So Hot When I Spit..
I have white boiz lookin like Patrick ewing from the Knicks..
you new to the game and you ratin my flow?
Im like a bomb with no time..im just waitin to blow..
The Ice on my wrist, leave you covered in snow..
Even george bush sayin He Gutta fo sho..
I stack green...You tryna clap me..
Ill pop more holes in ya face then alica keys acny..

dont gots gun..but it aint hard to get one..
so make like the cartoon...and jet-son..
if i come back ill crack open ya head son..
and leave u in the same place u got cha meds from..
Im so Sick...wen it comes to this rap game..
i push so much weight i think i got majour back pain..
i get so much luv gurlz manz tryna attack me..
but i just put em in da back seat like taxayz!!..

sick i say song of the year!!!!!! 9/10 im really feelin the flow on dis one n the lyrics are effin sick mang keep it up ma nigg
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Old 10-30-05, 04:08 PM   #39
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I was feelin that shit homie...Especially tha beat but tha lyrics were pretty nice and I thought your flow was pretty good also...Keep at it cuz your nice at this...Theres nothin for you to leave feedback on thats mine so dont worry bout rtf...HOLLA!!!!...1
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Old 10-30-05, 04:15 PM   #40
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I'm So Hot When I Spit..
I have white boiz lookin like Patrick ewing from the Knicks..
you new to the game and you ratin my flow?
Im like a bomb with no time..im just waitin to blow..
The Ice on my wrist, leave you covered in snow..
Even george bush sayin He Gutta fo sho..
I stack green...You tryna clap me..
Ill pop more holes in ya face then alica keys acny..

dont gots gun..but it aint hard to get one..
so make like the cartoon...and jet-son..
if i come back ill crack open ya head son..
and leave u in the same place u got cha meds from..
Im so Sick...wen it comes to this rap game..
i push so much weight i think i got majour back pain..
i get so much luv gurlz manz tryna attack me..
but i just put em in da back seat like taxayz!!..

sick i say song of the year!!!!!! 9/10 im really feelin the flow on dis one n the lyrics are effin sick mang keep it up ma nigg


thanx man i appreciate it. getz at me homie
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Old 10-30-05, 04:16 PM   #41
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I was feelin that shit homie...Especially tha beat but tha lyrics were pretty nice and I thought your flow was pretty good also...Keep at it cuz your nice at this...Theres nothin for you to leave feedback on thats mine so dont worry bout rtf...HOLLA!!!!...1


I apreciate this feedback aswell. Alright then

getz at me if you need anything
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Old 10-30-05, 04:21 PM   #42
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I'm not really the club banger type (in fact i really hate that kinda shit) but this was a good track. The chorus wasn't bad but wasn't as exciting as a club banger should've been. The first verse was kinda blah with the lyrics but the presence was there. the second verse i actually was kinda feelin. overall really i'd say on regular scale it was a 7/10 but seeing as it was a club banger type and i don't really feel those it's a really good club banger.

I guess you could return favor on my invektive battle if you have the time if you don't then don't worry about it i always have time to check out people's tracks and anytime you need feedback on anything just pm me. yea peace

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Old 10-30-05, 04:25 PM   #43
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indeed. thanks for the feedback. Will do
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Old 10-30-05, 04:34 PM   #44
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iite... intro is kool.... i aint really feelin the beat... reminds me of j-kwon lol... i aint gonna let that effect my views on it thiough.. you kick in pretty nice... lyrics are ill. flow is on point. quality is ok... delivery is niice.. emotion is kool aswelll second verse is kool aswell.. did flow better.. lyrics were kooll nice track man

part from the beat its an ill track.. keep droppin em man

rtf on my rapgame song.. aint got no others.. want me to fetch the link? coz its on the first page
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Old 10-30-05, 04:57 PM   #45
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aiight famz. ill rtf on that shit...thanx for the feedback
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