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Old 11-08-05, 01:22 AM   #1
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me?

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Gift given why risk livin with kids killing for subliminal reason's
Like a kiss isnt a nymphs gimick watch me get rid of all season's
fuck'a mixed race sucka's get placed in expanded concrete tombs
mother left faced with a fucking lost case after im touching all wombs
dead fetus birth,fed's retreat his turf,I carry out eternal damnation
scared fear thru dirt,red prepared for hurst's, I enter devils battle station
murder'd doves like loves lost, flirted trust with a rough cross wrong
splurted blood at a tough cost, dirt is placed above the lifes's gone
Look into my eyes, a crook with a angels disguise stays visible
I took my time to rise,I shook off all the cry's breaking your physical
Prepared to kamikaze my life to rid of the earths univerisal spot critical
I dare you to try and harm me I put earth up for auction....
sold to the highest bidder!!!

you cant fuck with gods key to the devils brain
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Old 12-06-05, 10:17 PM   #2
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It had nice rhymes and nice multies but i didn't really get the topic in this piece. Th whole overall structure and was nice, but it fell of the flow in some parts.....
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Old 12-12-05, 11:12 PM   #4
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It had nice rhymes and nice multies but i didn't really get the topic in this piece. Th whole overall structure and was nice, but it fell of the flow in some parts.....


Thast becasue its to tech for you lol
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Old 12-14-05, 11:57 PM   #5
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Lol...........Nice Come Back
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Old 12-15-05, 06:10 PM   #6
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*lights cigar *
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Old 12-15-05, 06:13 PM   #7
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You traitor And willa's a bitch for cheating on me. this means war Cs.. oh yes it does *screams thug life and empties the clip*
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Old 12-15-05, 06:17 PM   #8
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why did you empty your hair clips?
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Old 12-15-05, 06:17 PM   #9
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Lmao stop that
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Old 12-15-05, 06:35 PM   #10
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rofl.

Sorry
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