Battle Rules:

6-8 barz or 12 to 16 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
no bullshit votes
no hate votes
no dick riding votes
no unexplained votes

get verse in ASAP

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 11-18-05 at 04:22 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Call_it_Murder01 has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-15-05 09:29 PM.

aiight 6 barz (12 lines)

yo,
Asoon as I stepped in C renamed himself Lil' Crack whore.
'Cause for a livin' he let his homies move into his back door//1*
Cetch new-hot-clipz from a fifth the size of two-blocks-bitch.
Ya you scream fuck the world but u can't be on some Tupac shit//2**
Just to prove that hes above ur bed watchin u wit' photographs too.
If u 'straight up' use your dick jokes only the homo-laugh-at-u//3
Punchlines after punchlines, this dick sweet like stickin' melons.
Lil C a bad boy? Ha, I saw him chillin' wit' car theive felons//4
Youz a prime-time snitch, who makes up like eye-line-chicks.
Watch me skull fuck u after ur dead...See why-I'm sick?//5
Fuck da compliments I'll rush this Lil niggas confidence.
Flush this kat's brains down the john, no wonder he lost-his-sense//6

*Back door a.k.a his anus
**His avatar is Tupac

drop yo' shit B
HoLLa

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Where the police scream "FREEZE!!"
We scream "Please.....So what?"....
The streets molded us, we've seen the feinds throw up.
yuck........-Grafh

Lil C has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-16-05 07:37 AM.

One Key's Presence Is Primal, With The Bloody Instinct Havin Ya Dreadin Survival
I'm Embedded In Zygotes, Mom's Gave Birth To Corpses Cus Call_it_murdersDead On Arrival
I'll Crack Ya Eye Lens With A Rifle, Shreddin Ya Weak Back, Creased Half'd
My Steez Wack? I'll Write Rhymes On Kodak Films & Still Won't Get Negative Feedback!
Breathe Fast, Cus This Sick Individual Will Make Ya Stomach Turn As Rotated Bulemics
I'll Gloat With The Meanness...Flow To Demean Kids, While Dome's Molding In Sequence
One Key's Holding The Secret, And You Better Off Deceased, Sandwiched To Wedge Maggots
I'll Fist Ya Moms During Her Menstrual Cycle Til Ya Literally Catch Me Red Handed!
Call_it_murder Might Impress Faggots, But I'm The Reason Why Cats Are Just Scared To Drop
I Was Conceived On 2 Fisherman's Wharf The Way My Whole Life's A Pier Of Docks

Omfg!!!!!!!! I'm A Fuckin Female Fo Da 100th Time Ppl!!!! God Damnit!!!!!!! If U Gonna Battle Me @least Get My Sex Right Muthafuckas!

I didn't know u was a female I didn't read your profile or anything so i didn't know what u was so chill yahmean

omg....come on ppl uppin dis battle...............

Voted For: Call_it_Murder01

Ok..this was an ok battle.
But I gottta give it to Call_It_murder01.
LiL C had some really stretched lines.Yea,at times..his flow was good,but some lines were sloppy.The rhyming words were places in wrong spots 'n shit.Murder had a nice,smoother flow in this battle..due to a less sloppy rhyme scheme.

As for punches..again,murder got it.He actually attempted personals in his verse,with the Tupac/avy line.Lil C didn't have one.And He seemed to be too technical.And ease up on the vocab.This ain't some poetry shit.And no one gonna go get a dictionary just to understand ya' shit.

Vote-Call_it_murder01

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<--wow uhm sorry damn just cause i luv vocab n yall some dumb ass niggas dat dont b knowin shit......BUT once again IM A FUCKIN FEMALE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

come on ppl....................more feed...........

Voted For: Call_it_Murder01

"My Steez Wack? I'll Write Rhymes On Kodak Films & Still Won't Get Negative Feedback"

that punch is bnetter than anything said in Murder1's verse...

But most of the rest of lil C's verse was self praise... it belonged more in an open mic than in a battle... there were no real personal punches form either of you... it almost looks like you both used pre-writes and modified em a lil to look like they were to your opponant... Murder threw more disses in the end all be all and get my vote simply for attacking more...

Vote: Call it Murder1

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Voted For: Call_it_Murder01

call it murder i voted for u cus you had better flow and rymes and personals were more stronger

lil c ur stuff was ok but u can do better ur punches were not that strong and ur flow wasnt to great

no hate tho
rtf to one of my battles

Voted For: Call_it_Murder01

Vote - Callitmurder01

Flow- callit had better flow, his bars weren't as stretched, it was structured better, and just flowed better. Lil C had some long bars, with great multis, but it didn't flow as well as callitmurder.

Punches- meh, both catz had some okay punches, but nothin' special. Tie.

Personals- again, not a lot to work with here, but Call it Murder had better, more direct personals, and Lil C either didn't have any, or they were kind of Vague, so Call it Took Personals.

Multis- Good shit from both, but Lil C took multis...pretty good, though I think it ruined some of his punches cuz he forced the multis a bit. Call it had some good multis, but Lil C was way more complex with his multis.

Wordplay- Wordplay was minimal, nothing worth commenting on. Tie.

Alright battle, good work to both catz.

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Overall Net Text Record ~ 30-12 w/24 K.O.s

Overall Net Audio Record ~ 3-3 w/ 3 K.O.s