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Old 11-21-05, 12:58 PM   #1
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Diss To EXACT WUN

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Diss To EXACT WUN

EXACT WUN you’re whack and dumb and your facts
Come stupid over microphones with a psycho dome you lack
Skills as crack spills in your vein I’ll kill your lame back
You rap shitty information no witty conversation in the city
Face devastation you too stupid to survive part of a nerd committee
You fart garbage and need to attend art college get a degree
You can’t see me I’ll surround your town shoot this clown down freely
Like hot shot do flies your slop not true lies and your crew new
And don’t know about FUBU man yall boys doo-doo I’ll slew you
And far as your girl I’ll wreck her pies because I specialize
In throwing cock juice flowing hot, give up these are mechanize
Rhymes are powerful dawg. Proceed with caution soft
best auction off your furniture my cum stains are tossed
on your bed sprigs enough to make your head ring now cough
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Old 11-21-05, 10:44 PM   #2
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I’m worse than a nurse attend patients daily but remain
Flagrant and scaly with doctors take pills for my brain
They make me ill and lame the spirits within make my lyrics
Thin like sliced meat nice and unique sounds soft so hear it
Want plain satisfaction, main attraction was a girl of beauty
That hurled booty my referral to cutie with the red lips my duty
To rap, if she were in the nudity make me snap couldn’t take
A nap perhaps sex all night long, visuals are here with cake
Like a fiscal year great to audit her books as my sex mate
Coo-chee lips juicier and looser than a producer ready to
Audition her kisses
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Old 11-22-05, 03:56 PM   #3
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Drop two links or this will be closed

*Moved to Disstrack*
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Old 04-15-06, 04:41 PM   #4
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weak punches man, some filller in there. didnt really feel anything. you need to be more creative and original and personal if you can too. just take a little more time when you write and you'll be better.

but yeaaaa step it up man.
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