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Old 11-25-05, 09:12 PM   #1
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diss to my step dad

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It's so easy for me to be stepped on and be so abused
I make my statements at you but you always denie the truth
You ain't nothing to me you think that you see see right through me
Your still a fat slob and your fucking stupid ass always will be
You always say stuff about me mainly things like you doubt me
but you've been a macanic all ya life so u don't know nothing about me
you sit in a chair all day come home from work with ya same old dirty shirt
your faggot ass is pissing me off so i suggest ya shut up b4 i put u in the dirt
I'll fuckin nail you in a coffin and stick it deep into ur mothers ass
Your only living with us so you can wank and get my mothers cash
Your a clown I'll rip off ur ass and attach it to your flaming mouth
Get the fuck outta here can't stop u FAGGOT from sitting in my couch
bitch everyhting about you sucks your apearence is worse then a corpse
You fucking retard talking shit once i kill ya im'a get out the fucking blow torch
And when i come home it's like oh shit here comes another clown
then all of a sudden my gay ass brother comes out mocking me now
so I will haunt this bitch I will make him look like a even bigger faggot
the bitch is 23 and still hasn't left the house with his gf thats a maggot


Feel so much better.......
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Old 11-25-05, 09:18 PM   #2
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damn why did i chose this username!!!! now peeps associate me with you....which is not a good thing according to this piece. The rhyming was descent, nothing above average, the topic....i can relate to but man...you can't call yourself the god of war if your open mic can't impress peeps bro. 6-10
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Old 11-25-05, 09:24 PM   #3
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it's better then your wack shit.
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Old 11-25-05, 10:04 PM   #4
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are you serious!!!!!set up a battle bitch....let see who's whack!
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Old 11-26-05, 05:02 AM   #5
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omg clash of the techniques...

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It's so easy for me to be stepped on and be so abused
I make my statements at you but you always denie the truth
^ where's the diss???...

You ain't nothing to me you think that you see see right through me
Your still a fat slob and your fucking stupid ass always will be
^ diss = wack...no punch...need proof he's fat

You always say stuff about me mainly things like you doubt me
but you've been a macanic all ya life so u don't know nothing about me
^ how longs he lived with you?...long enough to know you...so um meh bar

you sit in a chair all day come home from work with ya same old dirty shirt
your faggot ass is pissing me off so i suggest ya shut up b4 i put u in the dirt
^ pshh @ the threat...no diss jus a played out threat

I'll fuckin nail you in a coffin and stick it deep into ur mothers ass
Your only living with us so you can wank and get my mothers cash
^ yo relationship update...he's fuckin ya mum...he's no lodger why would he need to wank lol...set up was ok though

Your a clown I'll rip off ur ass and attach it to your flaming mouth
Get the fuck outta here can't stop u FAGGOT from sitting in my couch
^ now you're admitting you can't stop him yet you're threatening him...lol

bitch everyhting about you sucks your apearence is worse then a corpse
You fucking retard talking shit once i kill ya im'a get out the fucking blow torch
^ nope...again jus measly threats...

And when i come home it's like oh shit here comes another clown
then all of a sudden my gay ass brother comes out mocking me now
^ no diss...now ya making references to ya gay brother...lmfao

so I will haunt this bitch I will make him look like a even bigger faggot
the bitch is 23 and still hasn't left the house with his gf thats a maggot

^ again no diss closer needed to be dope...it wasn't even near good...jus another reference


Feel so much better.......< why? where was the good disses?


Overall
This piece was poo...1st off disses were practically non-existant...fuck you went more at your gay brother and his mother...lmao...this is the type of shit you drop boy...no wonder you bit Eminem's shit...

but...when you did diss...it was not good either...setups mainly were poor and you jus said shit to rhyme...as usual...

And 1 thing...why drop a diss on ya step-dad when A) he's not ever gonna drop by RV and read it....and B) say this shit to his face....

me thinks someones a lil whimp
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i'm still tryin to figure out how bein born in another country makes somebody fake.

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Old 11-26-05, 06:39 AM   #6
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sure mad dog wanna see ur diss den just get off my dick fucker.
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Old 11-26-05, 07:27 AM   #7
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sure mad dog wanna see ur diss den just get off my dick fucker.


ooo lemme see lemme see i'm sure it's dope
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furthermore, june 3rd is the only good day to be born

^ Amen Brother ^

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i'm still tryin to figure out how bein born in another country makes somebody fake.

R.I.P OMB

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Old 11-26-05, 10:12 AM   #8
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i mean i feel you on this if i aint like my paps which i do but if i aint i would of made a song like this so i feel you i mean the rhymes could of been a little better i guess i mean i think you did better then i would of but still need to fix little corners and you'll be aight if i had to rate this? 6-10
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Old 11-26-05, 11:47 AM   #9
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why you aint check in now you off-line what's with that??

dont tell me he just duck'ed a rookie to the game?
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Old 12-07-05, 12:10 PM   #10
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why you aint check in now you off-line what's with that??

dont tell me he just duck'ed a rookie to the game?


if that was aimed @ me...then you should know he ain't no rookie kiddo...he's been here as long as me...and i've whored him more times than you've had hot dinners
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furthermore, june 3rd is the only good day to be born

^ Amen Brother ^

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i'm still tryin to figure out how bein born in another country makes somebody fake.

R.I.P OMB

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Old 12-07-05, 12:24 PM   #11
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Best youve done, easily.
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Old 12-07-05, 12:32 PM   #12
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if that was aimed @ me...then you should know he ain't no rookie kiddo...he's been here as long as me...and i've whored him more times than you've had hot dinners


no it wasnt towards you

but would you like to battle?
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Old 12-07-05, 01:43 PM   #13
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Kids: You ain't my daddy!
Step Daddy: Shut up!
*beat drops*
Step Daddy: I'ma call yo momma!
Kids: Call my momma!
Step Daddy: I'ma tell yo momma!
Kids: Tell my momma!
Step Daddy: You so bad!
Kids: I'm so bad? You just mad 'cuz you ain't my dad!
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