Let me start off by saying... Good shit all of you..



Spek and Y's

Spek your piece had very nice imagery too it.. this made it a very fun to read piece. I feel as if some of your rhymes may have been forced, but it wasnt too bad. Your lines were on point for most part... a little stretched here and there. The thing I liked most about your part was the imagery and emotion. That 8 line spoken words section was very creative.

Ysdat. your piece had very good imagery from beginning to end. I had a mental picture the whole way through. Your emotion made this piece very deep in the way went on about it. Your lines also were on point, a few strectched but nothing too long. Only thing i would like to see more from you is punctuation. Your piece has barely any punct. which made it all run together. Otherwise very nice piece.

Mentals and Lola Cruez

Your pieces were very descriptive and very creative. The story line from two different sides of 1 subject is very clever. You both had wonderful imagery and vocab. I felt more emotion from Lola's piece, but then again, the way you both used the topic, its kinda hard not to be emotional. Your lines were practically perfect the whole way through. Nothing strectched, mostly all same length and flowed well. My favorite part of the piece was the verses themselves how they played as a story and visual of two peoples lives. Very nice drop.

I am going to have to give the vote to mentalz and lola for being so creative and being a little more emotional. Their pieces were just more interesting and fun to read. Therefore getting my vote.

\v/ - Mentalz and Lola Cruez.

- no hate...

pz

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