Man this is HOT, def summin yall will hear on radio and tv, its on that tip, that love vibe, basically for the gurls that play wit ure mind, are u wit me or not?..ya feel me,

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"MAKE UP YO MIND"

Intro: Intermental
1st: Intermental
Hook: J Wes
2nd: Ike
3rd (bridge): J Wes
Hook: J Wes
Outro: Intermental

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Yeah I'm feelin the beat it's a nice beat for the song. Good lyrics on the first verse, and damn i'm liking the hook that's hot!!!!. Verse 2 good lyrics and nice flow real nice flow. and nice bridge and hook again but damn i'm felling the hook cuz. Nice outro ends the songs well.

Damn overall i'd give this song 9/10

Well done, homie.

thanks dawg I apreciate feed....

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1st off...Ike is a fucking ASSHOLE...so I WILL NOT be commenting on his garbage

2nd of all...I like the laid back type of beat...lil guitar action

ur flow was good...vocals could be a tad louder

u always get dope singers on ur collabs wit er body else...WTH, am I chop liver nigga?


very nice though


that's it


1st half of this track was good


daz all


P.S. Ike can kiss my fuckin ass...fuckin bumpy face gremlin


Loser...can't get bitches...Pussy mothafucka

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yo this track is strate man.....feelin da concept.....

Hook - feelin that tha most....

Int.- Ya flow could be a lil betta feels rushed at places...ya delivery fits da song kinda fustrated feelin.......quality could be upped too.....

Ike- Delivery is nice, lyrics are nice.....overall nice verse....

Yo man nice drop.......keep em comin........

RTF - Quick Reaction.........

pz

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ok
intro is ok not too much echo
intermental you have the wieredest voice lol flow was kind of choppy in parts but emotion was cool ur voice fit this well could up ur volume
hook yea ive heard this hate the instrumental bad guitar playing lol : /
ike ur voice grows on girls lol i usually like deep voices which is totally not ike yet i love ur voice flow was really good emotion was ike lol
overall cool track dont really liek the instrumental though

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thanks... at u sayin i have a weird voice nigga

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no lol i like it its really unique lol

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this song is good overall im not a fuckin rap critic so i dont do all that 5.9 6.2 bullshit but i thought flowz was doin it and beat choice was real savvy ya feel me ....overall nice to see track in a clusterfucked songs forum witht he most random drops ive seen in a long time but no doubt stay up and holla at me

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word.............Q has AIDS

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thanks tony.self..imma peep yo track in a min

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Checkin

Beats Dope


FUCKIN HELL @UR SINGERS

THEY DOPE

Inter:

Deliverys Dope

Flows Nice Lil Choppy

Emotions Good
Good lyrics

Pretty Much Well Rounded Verse Felt It A Lot

Ike:

Deliverys Is Fuckin Dope

Flows Nice

Emotions Good

Lyrcis Are Tight

Yeah Good Track

Oveall:8.7/10

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thanks....i apreciate it

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