Drop Again

Discover and see much like rubber research bounce nouns
And pounce on clowns rhyme weight ounce turn to pounds
Toast perms with a host of firm rhymes and burn crowns
Of kings wearing renowned bling that shines in eyes
Read bottle labels and proceed to throttle fable and tries
To be like Shakespeare make fake fear this and denies
They’re out classed my clout smash building like hurricane
Katrina, like Chicago this is a windy city, flinty and gritty with pain
Some cats spread rumors that cause head tumors and spark
Misled baby boomers thinking they’re players so halt the art
Of gossip my quotes earthly and noteworthy enough to be framed
These scriptures are pictures in writing so stop fighting the shame
Like Hercules have swell behaviors but have twelve major labors
To perform for a king, like a car climb steep hills to accelerate favors
And cheap thrills, come with a plain plan the size of a grain of sand
Lame like Rhodan the beast cats need to stand and feast as a fan

oK,here's what.STOP with the multi internals.Your not using it right.It's ok to keep one scheme per line,but damn..not 2..lemme show u what I mean.

Read bottle labels and proceed to throttle fable and tries
To be like Shakespeare make fake fear this and denies

^See,the bottle label/throttle fable..shakespear/fake fear,made this bar sound like shit.Mainly becuz it wasn't the "end" rhyme of the bar.
U were rhyming try and deny..but,you decided to also rhyme bottle label/throttle fable..shakespear/fake fear.... IN BETWEEN..which is fucking annoying.STOP DOING THAT!.

ANd your whole fucking verse consisted of that.STOP with it.WHoever told that doing was dope is a stupid muther fucker.