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Old 12-06-05, 09:36 PM   #1
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"Song Of Life" Feat........My younger brother. :O
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www.soundclick.com/limitededitioncan

Yeah...this was a project for his English classs haha.

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Limited Edition- 1st Verse
Limited Edition- Hook
Dumb-D-Dumb (My Brother)- 2nd Verse
Limited Edition- Hook

Beat Produced by: Limited Edition

Word...just thought I would upload it, cause I thought I did good on my part.

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=216334
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=216329
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Old 12-06-05, 09:42 PM   #2
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once again, the strings are annoying, flow is dope, lyrics is illnest, hook is cool, feeling it, dumb-d-dumb, ready to bet that limited wrott the lyrics for him, flow is okay, i have probs hearing the lyrics, upper that, overall good track
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Old 12-06-05, 09:48 PM   #3
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Oh crap I listened to "Truth" on accident, was just bout to critique it.

Okay now here's "Song of Life" -

lol @ "that's right we can't swear on this"... This beat's hot, ya flow's gotten better on the first verse your flow went off in one spot, i see a definate improvement. Your brother sounds like Intermental a lil'. It's kinda hard to understand what he sayin, overall not bad. The chorus was pretty decent. Not bad. That intro got me laughing.. "Motherrf*, that's right we can't swear on this" lol.
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Old 12-06-05, 10:01 PM   #4
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beat isn't bad


quality is adequate


levels loud-ish for my ears...but not bad


1st verse...feelin it....flow was good


hook is pretty decent


2nd verse...does sound a tad like inter...but, unlike Fiya, I can understand what he's saying.


levels are a tad low...PROJECT ur voice some


not a bad joint



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Old 12-06-05, 10:01 PM   #5
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K well first of all I like the verse the quality seemed off in spots but it's cool I guess. beat was decent and lmao @ the megie brothers thats dopeness. but overall ima give your brother props and shit cuz he aint half that bad, some pops but he has good lyrics and lots of potential. LE you did your thang for sure, dope drop yall

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Old 12-07-05, 12:14 AM   #6
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Thanks to all...

Uppin' for some more feedback.

Surprised at ya'll reactions to my brother lmfao.
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Old 12-07-05, 12:32 AM   #7
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not bad ur brother needs a lil more emotion and better delivery but it was ight...ok beat...guessin u produced it...ur delivery and emotion was better and the lyrics were ok...not bad...werd up and peace out
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Thanks all...

Up up and away...
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Old 12-07-05, 04:08 PM   #9
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LMFAO@INTRO

Aight....

Flows Nice

Emotions Good

Deliverys Nice,Like It Suits The Track Well

Hmm...Lyrics Are Nice As Hell

Presence Good

Hook:I Like This,Its Koo

You Lil Bro(LOL)

Aight

FLows Koo,A lil Choppy

Yeah Kinda Like Inters Style With His Whisper Voice Lol

Emotions Aigth Could Be upped

Deliverys Ok,Could Be Upped

Hook Again

Well Ya Bro's Got Mad Potential....Keep Up Limiteds Bro

Lol

Overall:7.5/10

Plz Rtf On My "The Lost Tapes"

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Old 12-07-05, 05:25 PM   #10
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aiigh song
damn @ how your brother's quality kinda messes up the song
thats a dope ass beat too, you made it?
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If you do kegel excercises, you would be able to do something similar without having to hold your tip shut with your hand. After you've been doing them, hold off ejaculating as long as you can to really let the pressure build and then aim for your girlfriend's eye and let 'er rip.. You might get lucky and shoot her eye out. That's probably exaggerating it a bit, but it will still be hilarious
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Old 12-07-05, 05:31 PM   #11
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aiigh song
damn @ how your brother's quality kinda messes up the song
thats a dope ass beat too, you made it?


Yeah man I made that beat.

Word at my bro's quality...mine sounds good, and then his is all popping and shit.

He got a 100% on the project though, word.
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lemme get one of them dope beats up outta you
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lemme get one of them dope beats up outta you


Hit me up on AIM and I'll make you a custom beat.
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Old 12-08-05, 04:34 PM   #14
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