gotta give it to ya liked it, lol at my diss, i kinda expected more of that tho, and damn im suprised u came at ike i thought yall were cool, whats up with that, anyway, nice lyrics, nice flow, i was feelin tha beats but not all that much, but all in all good shit props yo

rtf

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=217356

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Word at dissing that fag intermental...Lmfao at this whole shit...This shit is genious. I dont think I spelled genious right. Im retarded. Beat is a great choice, you murdered this shit...Energy level is great...lmfao at the hairline "rolling back" line...This shit is classic...lmfao at the ThatNigga diss...Flow is great man, you don't slip off once...The beat change was unexpected, you did it so well that I didnt even notice the beat changed til I got to the willa peer diss...ROFL AT THE NUNS LINE!!!!!!! AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA Wow...This shit is fucking vkhsdkjfgadghfdbgvjdfhbndhn.

Man...

ROFL

Nut butter

OWNEEEEEEDDDDDDDDDDD

I dunno what else to fuckin say, this shit is hot. RTF on "Loving You"

Pz

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ThatNigga, where'd you hear me say anything about ike? What are you talking about?

Black Magik, word, thanks for the feed man, lmao. Dudes hairline IS rollin back son, notice you never see him without a hat? lol. Bald ass muh fucka. It's a wrap for these niggas man, and this ain't the end.

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it says sumthin like ike smells more pussies than a strip club, thas what it sounded like,prlly jus didnt hear it righ

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i was wondering....what he was talking about lol.....im like uhh i didnt hear diss to me....lol

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i'm feeling this track. i love that instrumental (from a producer's point of view) and there was some really funny punches in there. didn't know you thought my boy inter was a bitch though :S but other than that this was a good song. you got a cool flow as well and you've got one of those voices that sounds like "you've heard him on the regular for years" if you know what i mean. but yeh keep dropping fire mayn for real.

~peace~

y didnt u list everyone u dissed..........

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...The real Renegade before Hova...

because it's a stupid idea. That's why.

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ok......... itd be alil easier for the listener...... this was by far one of the better diss tracks

u got Nos pretty good, and Intermental or w/e lol... this was hard hittin and it was a good beat choice..... and ur flow on it was almost flawless and sounds good on that beat.........nice track, now just wait for 15 responses

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...The real Renegade before Hova...

Thanks for the feedback.

I wouldn't explain or lay out any track though. If I gotta talk in detail about the track or give the lyrics, then I see it that I didn't do a good enough job writing the rhyme and delivering it clear enough for people to decypher it. Luckily for me, I did and it is, so I didn't.

As for 15 responses, it'll never happen. Pussies don't work that way. everyone's heard this, or otherwise know they were in it by now, yet they'll pretend they never heard it and continue to run and hide in their bitch-made hiding places all the while still smiling in my face and acting like we're good buddies, like Will Appear and L.V. are still doing. At most, pussies'll act tough to their friends, but would never in their life confront me to my face (or else I'd never needed to make this) with anything that resembles rhymes. Nos is a perfect example. Dude had all this garbage to say about my track and how he's gonna ignore it, yet he IM's me out of the blue and immediately starts crying about the track like a true pussy would. TWICE at that. Nos is just a typical herb. Just look at the guy, lol, cmon man, what's he gonna do? Jack shit. Who's gonna diss me, ThatNigga? Wow. Past Tense the fake crip slash jesus rapper? Big deal. Intermental? Who even cares about Intermental? Half the people listening didn't even know who he was. I'd expect 5 at most, and they'll be easily delt with. Besides, how can you be mad at getting busted doing something you know is two-faced as fuck?

It's a wrap. Aint shit else to say.

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"he talkin about blocks but he filin his nails..." gettin on Q... wow
COT DAYUM... that was hilarious
i think this was pretty good. unfortunately a lot of the words on here were inaudible. i mean, i feel how u change ur voice and all, but it was hard to undersstand at times. i liked the beginning the best wit tha rhymes at nostradomus and changin tha beat was good idea. but wwhen u got to the new beat, u got a lil off beat. it was still nice to me tho.
keep up da good wizzerk

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I didn't like the beat,didn't feel it was a good choice for this song..
And seemed like your beat killed your voice a bit...prolly becuz it was too loud.
Hated the crowd effect that you put in this shit at the beginning
Punches and everything was good...
The Q's hairline shit was dope..
As a diss,this shit was really good..
As a track,a little above decent,nothing more..mainly becuz of the beat and shit..
Not the best,not the worst...

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I have to say good track overall even if I don't know any of these cats. This solidly stands up. good job.

^^whats ur alias? .

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