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Old 12-18-05, 10:14 PM   #1
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A Reflection Of The Past
 
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anthem for insanity - Freeverse

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hard times gone silent
good times turn violent

........... .............. .............
the human brain ....
Is made of rubber chemicals
you go insane......
Behind the wheel of a vehicle
death awaits.....
To slaughter your soul
learn your fate.....
Your a warrior until old

in which.....
Savage activities fulfill your fantasy
so he beats on woman
in order for him to feel manly

Damn me, what's my problem
I have dents in my heart...
but can't seem to solve them
life is scary, never know what to expect
except.....
live not worried about death, but swing on the edge
no need to fear letting go.......
Just ride the storm
and when a love one turns invisible.......
Don't mourn
instead celebrate his life.....
And fight, for the fact your all broke
with a beer in your hand
and a gun down your throat.....

''''''hahahahahahahahaha'''''' .....
...............*COCK'D THE TRIGGER*

.................................................. .

*B L A S T*

(DRIP DRIP DRIP)
R....I.....P
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Old 12-18-05, 10:28 PM   #2
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Old 12-18-05, 10:43 PM   #3
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am feelin it but its not ya best i seen u drop Hall Of Fame poetry
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Old 12-18-05, 11:46 PM   #4
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Nice piece here. The key to this piece was the emotion. Which I feel for the most part you put your heart into it which made it a enjoyable piece.

Good stuff bro and stay up!
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