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Old 12-27-05, 02:23 AM   #1
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Verse 1
-Check my resume' nigga im the defintion of real-
-Raised by the gun, since a lil nigga i been surrounded by steel-
-Inglewoodz Finest i built my name off you faggots-
-Act hard in front of the camera but u dont hold my street status-
-Kontroversy aint jus name, i'll bring it to u personally-
-You take shots but none of ya ryhmes is touch'n me-
-Im not evemn gone take dis shit seriously, itz a petty beef-
-Im on that fuck the world shit, so it aint about me u and itz west versus east-
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Old 12-27-05, 02:50 AM   #2
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good post....short a bit simple but good drop...also a lil short....u replied like i sucked n need2 leave rv but im still here so i guess u can see i aint listenin 2 u youngin bark ya orders....peep my diss 2 rv hataz n dick ridaz....n then tell me 2 get outta here...matter of fact come over n make me....n fuck dat eastcoast westcoast beefing shit...dats how we lost hip-hop's greatest rappers in the first place......dont b a cause 2dat same mistake
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Old 12-27-05, 03:12 AM   #3
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yea... not bad good flow 7.5/10..

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Old 12-27-05, 11:00 PM   #4
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i dont even no u nigga, i jus wanted to start sumtin, if im serious u would no,lol, but thnx for da feed
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Old 12-27-05, 11:06 PM   #5
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^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^that was horrible
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Old 12-28-05, 01:46 AM   #6
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Young Drama
Verse 1
-Check my resume' nigga im the defintion of real-
-Raised by the gun, since a lil nigga i been surrounded by steel-
-Inglewoodz Finest i built my name off you faggots-
-Act hard in front of the camera but u dont hold my street status-
-Kontroversy aint jus name, i'll bring it to u personally-
-You take shots but none of ya ryhmes is touch'n me-
-Im not evemn gone take dis shit seriously, itz a petty beef-
-Im on that fuck the world shit, so it aint about me u and itz west versus east-

Average..
I could hear Young Jeezy spitting that. Good flow and easy to deliver, but simple as hell. 2 syllables rhymed maximum.

-Check my resume' nigga im the defintion of real-
-Raised by the gun, since a lil nigga i been surrounded by steel-

Your opener is your best bar IMO

-Kontroversy aint jus name, i'll bring it to u personally-
-You take shots but none of ya ryhmes is touch'n me-

that doesn't rhyme..

-Im not evemn gone take dis shit seriously, itz a petty beef-
-Im on that fuck the world shit, so it aint about me u and itz west versus east-

My 2nd fav. bar, but nobody wants to bring back east vs west
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Old 12-28-05, 04:58 AM   #7
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more like *signed*

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Old 12-28-05, 09:16 AM   #8
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Ya, what in the fuck? Feedback has gotten so pussy since I was last here. This piece was horrible man. I hate to break it to you but, I don't even wanna see anymore shit like this in this forum again.

For one... Thats like 8 lines! That's not an OM that's a cypher drop, so don't waste OM readers time. If you're going to take the effort to actually post atleast make sure it's a minimum of 16 lines. And lastly... NO ONE WANTS TO HEAR STUPID GANGSTER SHIT! We're all tired of it. Rv has seen mooooooore than enough wannabe's and the last thing that we need is one more. Think outside the box man. Talking about the same shit but think of creative way to deliver it because this is just... Blah.
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Old 12-28-05, 02:03 PM   #9
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^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^werd tha fukk up rv is 75 percent garbage now
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Old 12-28-05, 06:54 PM   #10
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who tha fuck r u niggaz????????????
lol, dont tell wat tha fuc to say if i wanna spit meaningless "gangster" blabel then i will, suck my dick u fuck'n retards
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Old 12-28-05, 06:57 PM   #11
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pretty tough with yer text....how is that spittin by tha way u fukkin waste of space
set it up audio and get clowned if not dont ever speak to me again

p.s i would own u at text to but i dont do that shit no more
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Old 12-28-05, 07:35 PM   #12
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.....................................talking about my shit sucked......Who are you signed too. Because i signed you and saw that shit i would want my money back. 4.5................that what i give it.
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Old 12-28-05, 07:37 PM   #13
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lmfao@dolla wut up cuzzin its ca$ wuts been popin man
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Old 12-28-05, 07:41 PM   #14
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lol let me stop fuckin man the shit was decent for what it was. Keep up the good work. If your gonna drop a 8 liner try and drop it in the freestyle section. But if its in the OM make it OM quality. Stay up folk.
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