Ricochet Rhymes While Others Lay In A Dumpster
An Everlasting Stuggle Consricting The Mind Of A Hustler
Who Unwinds As A Youngster, Blinded By Diamonds
Laying In A Closed Casket, Sleeping In Eternal Silence
See Violence Has Us Wanting And Prayin For Jesus
We Need This To Start Recievin' Threatment This Evenin'
To Keeps Souls From Clashin Into Infinite Brawls
For We'll Meet Up At The End Were The Intimate Cross
Boxes For Homes, The Throne Of A Man Is His Axis
One Man's Trash Is Another's Treasure And Matress
So It's More Than Physical, But An Artistical Movement
Close Our Own Paths And Cut More Tracks Than Who Kid
And The Infinite Won't Repent From It Or Sentence It
An Intrument To Show The World That Were Heaven Sent

Hook x2
Invision A Place Were Blood Blinds The Horizon
Kids Starve To Death And Many Others Have Died In
And Just Know Eternal Bones Lay In Your Grave
For No Matter Were We Are Now.....
......We Meet At The End Of The Day

A Visionary With Mystical, But Esquicit Traditions
To Vanish This Violence Like An Exibit Magicians
See A Sinner's Sanctum Is The Devil's Throne
So We Feed Those Withering With A Rebel's Bones
Semi's Empty Into Plenty Of Mothers And Children
While Our Structure Has Us Caged Like Collapsin' Buildin's
It's A Fact That We'll End Up In A Trail Withered And Old
Lost In The Mist Of Winter, Covered In Splinters And Cold
Swallowing The Hollow Pride Given By Role Model Stature
See Down A Path To Find The World's Core Get Fractured
Cracked Up, Even Splattered And Thrown In A Dungeon
While The Clouds Gather To Bring More Tears Than Blades Of Onions

Hook x2
Invision A Place Were Blood Blinds The Horizon
Kids Starve To Death And Many Others Have Died In
And Just Know Eternal Bones Lay In Your Grave
For No Matter Were We Are Now.....
......We Meet At The End Of The Day

I'll Post My Links Once i Get Back From Work........

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damn no feedback in this shit...................

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cmon and drop some feed, i'll rtf........

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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=219887

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2624277

now uppin for feed....lol

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c'mon don't sleep on this peeps................

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Dam that was deep Tech,.... had nice flow, really good vocab and the imaginary
was well nice.... this was a dope drop,....

A Visionary With Mystical, But Esquicit Traditions
To Vanish This Violence Like An Exibit Magicians
See A Sinner's Sanctum Is The Devil's Throne
So We Feed Those Withering With A Rebel's Bones

Nice fams I like them two bars, and the hook added depth to the song
as well

Stay up Tech

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Thanks for the feedback fam.........uppin for more feedback....

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Don't Sleep On This Shit Ya'll........Feed Up

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dey B sleepin on here , foe real
this good piece dawg
it flowed well , you did a good thing on the wordplay
was def feelin this one ... had a good imaginary
nice hook .... props .. id say keep droppin sum like this

return da favor

http://community.rapverse.com/member.php?u=34786

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yea they do, thanks for the feed homie..........

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uppin this bitch for the last damn time for some feedback........!!!!!

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i agree hot drop tech btw the was the point of my drop if u read the whole thing...i seperated sum shit so its easier 2 read but please peep n give feed in return and rv dont sleep these hataz jus 2 egotistic 2 appreciate another mc's talent peace fam 1

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my new shit peep

sound structure, nice cadance developed... fucked with the vocab selection, dope flow... the verses were short... you should go a whole 16 if you want to use this as an audio eventually... lyrically shit was on point though... I fucks with it

return the love reply to: Last Breath in the audio tracks section

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