im here to blow u away. rip u up into a paper mache.
when u see me u dont walk, u tend 2 run away.
since i blew up, every one likes my sounds.
got ppl singin my songs when no 1 else is around.
i started alone. and picked up my own zone.
now look at my raps and how much they have grown.
just like me, but i knew eventualy.
i would get all this love, unattentionaly.
i stick to the present, cus thats where i stand.
i dont want to lose focus, and let life slip out of my hand.
i try hard to stick to the game, i do it 4 the money not for the fame.
my fanz love scanz, but they dont know my own name.
so all i do is walk around hanging my head in shame.
knowing one day they might know who i am.
until then i really dont give a damn.
cus i still remember who i am.
what i do and where i came from.
my songs stick 2 u like chewing gum.
Miami boy. born and raised.
till i move 2 nicaragua, and thats the end of my days....


this isnt finshed. ill finish it later, got nuttin else.

drop some post and tell me wut i should change.

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=219718
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=219884

forgot bout the links

nice drop still a bit simple as far vocab goes but still a decent drop btw where is
nicaragua,leon? neva heard of it....but keep droppin fam n thanx again for ur feed on my mk track peace

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Shit Was Real Simple, You Need To Read Th Dictionary Or Study in English Class Cause You Was Way Short On Vocab. Try Using Every Single Line To Get YOur Point Across Homie.. Don't Use The FIller bars, That Only Makes It Seem Like A Person Isn't Secure Of What They Have To Say....Return The Favor On One Of My Open Mics

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yea, tech skillz is right, u was short on vocab, but it was aight

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