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Old 02-13-06, 03:18 PM   #1
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Pull Ya Self Together ft *Trakk Star*

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Intro: ME
Verse 1 n Hook: ME
Verse 2 n Hook: Trakk Star
Verse 3: ME
Outro: ME
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Old 02-13-06, 03:20 PM   #2
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Old 02-14-06, 07:24 AM   #3
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eeeeeeeewwwww @ this beat, im sick of hearing it grrrrr.... lmao @ how u say unique hahaha.... delivery is ok, but ur basically just shouting so sounds un-natural, flow is cool, abit repetitive, lyrics are cool, simple though.... eeewwww this hook is wack, no offence to u man, but i kno u dnt gun tote n carry knives so why talk it???.... second, delivery is more natural, needs uppin tho, flow isnt as good, sounds like ur struggling to flow on this beat at times, voice is nice n grimey tho... lyrics again ok... all in all its ok, nothin amasing though.
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Old 02-15-06, 12:29 AM   #4
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im feelin the beat,

the lyrics were decent.

Overal this wasnt bad.
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Old 02-15-06, 12:56 AM   #5
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lets see here...first cat flowed good...vocals to low.....second cat..flow was good as well..could of came better but ya dong your thing...quality could be better..

just try eqing the vocals a little better..other then that....cool track
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