Replied to: Fear & Loathing: by Rexless

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Going Under: by BlAzInHot

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How dare, any believe, I have no bite, no tricks up my sleeve
These feeble infidels deceive themselves, believe themselves
To be better than I, my authority high, as the clouds in the sky
These peasants show lack of fear and respect, in motion commotion must be set
The foundations of nations must crumble, to humble those testing my might
So I set a blaze airline flights, with unholy mesmerized half crazed knights
Of my order, while pumping more drugs through crowded boarders
Eliminating middlemen, the product more potent, in states of dream
Fiends take by any means, means of getting green, to sate uncontrollable habits
Crime raises, rabbits meaning the meek, turn the other cheek or wear disguises
No one yet realizes, the surprises, lurking, police chiefs pressured by grief
Of families rocking burial reefs, of those kin laid beneath, in the wake of street beef
Enraged city residences, governors, even the president demanding dismissal
Profit margins plummet by the fiscal,
The internal defense already immense, becomes more dense, money's spent
Deepening debt, thus in 10 years time, current children will pay 50% increases
In taxes, Social security fails, medicare derails, and country men abandon ship
Patriotism'll hit an all time low, then expose those corrupt appointed officers
I offered a... Shall we say compromise, to compromise drug ties
Eliminating true good guys, replacing em with left behinds, born subordinates
Internet hack, receive exact coordinates, trade information to enemy nations
Watch complacent, bases in remote places, make CNN, smoking with bombarded basements
Enemy lines advance, troops stretched so thin they stand no chance
I dance on charred remains, of famed self proclaimed savors ambitious degenerates
Librarian heretics practicing politics, until martial laws is declared
By the 1st president with the balls to dare, balances obsolete, turning society on ear
In fear the people will jeer, uprise, mission complete... topple the government


Leave feed I'll RTF

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Nice man, lots of multies in this, the vocab was very nice, everything i liked except that the lines were too long for me, but im always like that lol. But good job man, keep it up. Please rtf on anything in the sig, thanks. Peace.

^ no doubt will do... thankx for the feed

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yeah i liked it the lines are to long i donno everyone has there own writting style so i'm gonna say it was damn good keep doing yo thang man and don't let anyone put you donw you have hella potential hey if you could can you take a look at my choices n consequence