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Old 03-13-06, 03:42 PM   #1
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Irreversible

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IRREVERSIBLE
miss hallem a. flora, a title reflectin aurora.
your regular hollywood chick - a fiend of sephora.
the realist connection reporter w/ a rare skin disease.
a complexion of horror, year round tears in her knees.
hair darker then sees - candy red lips chap in autumn.
blame the world, she led a childhood mocked in solumn.
surgical scars from back to bottom - usually long.
the stylists attacked'r often, at the beauty salon.
she put on fifteen - body fell into a brew n pill feeble.
never blessed w/ euphora, twenty-two & still single.
accustomed to feel evil - tears like a rain tinted window.
hard to sleep when its damp on both sides of the pillow.
life is depressin & hallem was born w/ extra baggage.
the majority want perfection, shed be blessed as average.
the illness made her bleed constant - like a pessimist.
fed up w/ this sorrow, the wreck returned to a specialist.
"i could perscribe you cigarettes", the doctor laughed.
said it'll reduce ten years - just hope for a heart attack.
headed home w/ a clouded temple - echoing novo hallem.
crippled minded, she lost herself in her family photo album.
she crossed a portrait, reminding her of laughter & worth.
a black & white photo, of her sister & pastor at church.
her sister - jainey passed away just six years after birth.
hallem was jealous, jainey wasnt trapped on this earth.
when it all fell down, she was done fighting off them foes.
hallem disposed - faith in miracles & took a garden hose.
she put on her oddest clothes - symbolizin life's piracy.
climbed in her car & closed - the door shut for privacy.
hallem sobbed, relfectin the past in foreign mirage.
mysterious voices abroad - blessin her death bed garage.
the pain of massage - she burries hope in her thoughts.
frail brain a collage - the hose from window to exhaust.
the gas emerged, she choked - several gags at first.
she thought of black n hurse & the chapters after hers.
realized death cant reverse - nor can it cover will.
w/ hands removed, she breathed til her lungs were filled.
she was young & still - perceived life as satan's technique.
her body hated, she felt strife eight days of the week.
the illness, limited her search for her favorite things.
the irriversible, renamed'r soul & became'r angel wings.

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Old 03-13-06, 03:44 PM   #2
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Old 03-13-06, 08:14 PM   #3
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"headed home w/ a clouded temple - echoing novo hallem.
crippled minded, she lost herself in her family photo album.
she crossed a portrait, reminding her of laughter & worth.
a black & white photo, of her sister & pastor at church."

hahaha... where did you got this from?? its too good to be true
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Old 03-13-06, 10:25 PM   #4
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Shit was alright in my opinion. Alotta vocab. and some good multies. I give it a 8.5/10 Keep up the good work and keep elevating.
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Old 03-14-06, 04:07 PM   #5
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this shit was aight homes.....nothing spectacular just alot of vocab and multies good piece though.............8/10 overall.
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