Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Word of the day is..........'Ripped'

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 03-19-06 at 04:21 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Expired battle close - win

Po'etiquette has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-16-06 04:25 PM.

Carmelo has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-16-06 04:29 PM.

I'ma use the word of the day....Have Po Ripped wit the 'First Post'
Like petty criminals you aint worth the time or bars..
............................................So I'll just use 'em to boast
Theres no rest for the wicked, and you know that i'm ALL THAT...
Steppin to me is like pushin wheelchairs over, Ya Guranteed to Fall-Back...
Your what I call-whack, & on the mic ur supposedly nice?
you busta-rhyme & everybodys scratchin heads like its full of Lice.
How you got this far without bein dissed...to me that theres a Mystery..
fuck it, You can take my Hard-wood like you just Kissed-a-tree
That punch goes down In history, and your lines just snapped & broke
you ask for feedback and you get props on a parody...
...............................Cos Ya Raps-a-Joke...............
When I Clap, you choke....and Theres not a fuckin Gun in sight...
yA flows like Pornstars asshole, its a joke to think This Bum-is-tight
You might come hard tonight...as long as the lotion and 'Mags' in hand..
youd think I just anally took it to him...
............................The way I beat this fag til he cant stand
but you aint walkin funny, matter fact....you aint walkin at all...DUMMY
This boys like Infected stomachs...
............................Cos hes only ever ''sick'' at the 'Tummy'
My flows like sweet air, each rhyme is refreshin as Sprite...
I dropped this in 10 minutes, and it prolly took you all night!..
now I'm defining whats real, and Provin that opposites really do Attract..
Its obvious I'm Ill.....so that would make you the one whos WHACK!
Watch ya back, dudes assed out, I swear...He's even Passed-gay...
In battles you see'n more L's than a Bob Marley Ashtray!....


Hummm...
Thats sound of a slave, So be brave or I got you ON WHIP..
Watch his played personals on me...
..........all said before but hes Just Flipped!.....Ha.

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Topical head, schooling a self proclaimed RV text vet.

bro, setting up this battle, im glad we can put your wackness to use
bragged about being TC , we done that to give you a confidence boost
can see your getting frustraited, like a nympho nurse, im blowing out ya patients
is this a battle? i thought i was freestyling and carmelos an a aquaintance
you could throw fists at dictionarys ,still wouldnt be able to punch with words
I might aswell change my name to waiter, they way carmelo fucking gets served
basically, this battle is suicide got you allready hanging in the noose
I admit bro, your NUTing to fuck with, like balls on a prostitute
glass jaw ass mother fucker, we can all see thru your lies
daily tryna test my intelligance, bout to find out why they call me wise (Y's)
its a known fact, speak when ya got something intelectual to shoot
proberly explains why carmelos voice box is allways on mute



no ones reading your verses, bitch, your simply ripped, teared and torn
bro, its lights out, like the ugly ass kid in your avy, your verse is a still born
next name change kid, type in dry sex .................... you fake fuck
topical head stepping out of his comfort zone, text? is gay but
We all know his AIM is to win,but let it be known, it isnt his fault
Id switch style's, tell you your best in ya crew, but thats proberly a insult
with your weak as punches, fuck knows which way they directed
I leave you like ya ma when she gave birth.......unexpected

Ohhhhh, wtf @ you dissin my kid.

Thats low, but still...should be Intresting, lets get some votes on this

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you could throw fists at dictionarys ,still wouldnt be able to punch with words
I might aswell change my name to waiter, they way carmelo fucking gets served

lmao dope shit

You might come hard tonight...as long as the lotion and 'Mags' in hand..
youd think I just anally took it to him...
............................The way I beat this fag til he cant stand

haha dope shit too..

just checkin the polls.. good battle.. but wtf at like 30 lines yo !

Voted For: Carmelo

i voted like this..............

carm - u had a better flow and nicer rymes and a nice opening punch...............but u lacked in personals

po. u had nice flow, better punches and personals........but lacked in style and structure

over ok battle but vote to po. he just delivered better

no hate no one all goog..

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

structure sucks ......... i just wanted to see polls

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southbeachmiamiho

Honestly.. structure doesn't matter ... gotta read text out loud.. flow is what matters.. and text can flow if u read it out loud.

pollz............................................. .........

I think you got this fam-o

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Tony Green's Soundclick

This vote was ment fo Po'

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Tony Green's Soundclick

yeh, I noticed that. carmelo stayed silent, but i bet it had of been done and the vote registered for me, he would scream DQ

Voted For: Carmelo

fuuuuuck!!!!!!!!!

obiously can't vote
this is too fucking matched

Removed

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