Superhero my ass, you’re a bitch to the end of time,
... Heroine in your flesh?
Yeah, maybe through Wonder Women’s blood line!
Order in the court, prepare to be judged by my fists,
These snakes are trying to get a highlight,
... Better luck as Medusa’s Hair Stylist,
Smack you with my shovel. Get sent to the grave quick,
Just call me the first biblical man..
.. Hence all of these herbs on my dick,
I got a recipe for destruction.. So that it, you’re warned,
Team up with Zeus in Hell’s Kitchen,
... Just to fucking cook up a storm!
Oh look it’s the Bearer of Bad Noose here to kill you lames,
Draining your oxygen for pleasure,
Worse than asthma patients playing the choking game!
I got a calendar for your death to hit you with a gust, son...
So I’ll turn you to Ash: Wednesday,
.. Without exploring Catholic customs!
You’re whack as hell, nothing close to dope in the slightest,
Have your friends saying “This dudes nuts! Hang low,”
... Like criminals with Elephantitis,
Ill since birth, I cause seismic waves through the Earth,
Plus I’ll stretch your blue balls to your forehead,
.. Like Tea-Bagging a Smurf!
Try and contain me, I guarantee nothing will work,
Dude, you’ll get cut off my hand gestures,
... Worse than Amputees in Circle Jerks,
Dishing out fists to the chest plate crashing on loners,
But people don’t take bull in a china shop,
.. Like angry silverware owners,
Send paperwork to shreds, far from a soft diss,
Plus I do more of a bang up job...
... Than intern affairs at the office!


Link 1: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=225494
Link 2: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=225325

Feed me.

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Uppens to the Puppens .

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Damn, that was probally the most creative rep type track I've read in a long time man. Lol I'm probally the worst person you could have asked to read this since I suck at text and haven't written or judged it in a good two years now... But I actually liked this. Everything felt EXTREMELY creative, which is rare to find in these types of drops in my opinion. The flow and structuring I loved aswell, it was a real unique flow that was never really to predictable, but still always sounded like it fit. Uuuuuum, lol what else do I judge a rep track on? Punches? Oh, wordplay, had some nice wordplay placed through out the piece that also worked very well towards the overall originality of the work. Uum ya, that's about it man... Not really my kind of piece, but I actually did enjoy the read.

Thanks for indeph feed like always Atty, lol..
Uppin for some more feed..................

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this was very very creative man.....this a real warning yo!!!....old school comin back HOLL HOLLA..


well this had very nice punches man and wordplay. verynice flow and structure.
this was unique and original man nice man nice i loved it man..

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Ok man thanks man for the feed man..
Man, uppin' man...

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Ugh... go fucking kill yourself.

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rofl fuckin creative shit kidd. i was thrown off with the title thought but none the less this shit was pretty funny. u had lots of multies and a lil of internal rhyming and shit. good job and keep it up kidd. give me some feed back on some of my om.s if u would

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wakakakakakaka .

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Puppens is teh dope all the damn timmmmmme mang yoz like mangoz.

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stfu . .

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