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Old 04-10-06, 12:52 PM   #1
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Old 04-11-06, 09:18 PM   #2
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Old 04-12-06, 02:32 AM   #3
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dog you better put ya links up or this shits gon get closed quick...

but on the real...i like the flow, like the lyrics....lines of lattatude like got me to step back n listen closer....maybe a hook>??? i unno....sounds ill....nice undergroundish track here....turn ya backround vocals down a bit. n shits tight...your the hottest new kid since me haha...keep it up
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Old 04-12-06, 02:35 AM   #4
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Old 04-12-06, 02:57 AM   #5
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This is pretty good you got some nice lyrics..i'm feelin not too bad
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Old 04-12-06, 03:47 AM   #6
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Quality is clear, flow was on point, lyrics were ill, nice change ups, def needs a hook, pretty ill track.

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Old 04-12-06, 04:14 AM   #7
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Old 04-12-06, 07:20 AM   #8
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this was nice...lyrics, delivery, and flow were all nice...only thign was the way your first verse sounded....i was hearing two voices at once, lol....but yea str8 trakk
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Old 04-12-06, 07:21 PM   #9
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Old 04-13-06, 06:51 PM   #10
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Old 04-13-06, 07:22 PM   #11
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good track....nice beat ...solid flow....good lyrics...can't complain...hook woulda ben nice
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Old 04-13-06, 09:01 PM   #12
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ok beat, Solid flow. Adlibs could be a bit lower. Lyrics are good bro.
a hook would of sealed this track tight though.
good quality.
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Old 04-14-06, 02:36 PM   #13
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Old 04-14-06, 02:57 PM   #14
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Listenin' quality is real str8..flow is decent, work on da breath control a lil, but flow is str8 and i realy like it, adliubs are weird..but not much a prolem..beat is hot..lyrics are hot...and i like your voice.....decent multis..8/10..

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Old 04-14-06, 08:53 PM   #15
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