New mixtape track from the one and only.............

Listen to the track, the title explains it all....if you dont catch on, your slower then retard kids at recess......

Breakthrough - - Art of War's Battlefront


I will edit with my two links very soon, so dont close............

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Grim

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2734908


http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=227579


ight..................FEEDBACK PEOPLES!!!!

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Grim

i dont know what that effect is. like an echo of a lower voice.. or you lowered ya libs.... or somthn...very good lyrics on this one... flow is pretty good... mic presence i didnt really think was all there... your delivery and emotion where alright... pretty short..little piece... but was def a good listen..........oh wait... there is more... beat change... i like the way you did that production wise thats pretty dope.. .i like this beat alot better than the last one.. i like your flow better and you came harder on this second half...and that wierd effect aint on ya vocals......fasho good shit

rtf
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=227615

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southbeachmiamiho

sup bro...feel free to check out my new Gospel joint called "Save Thyself"


1st off, I think I spit to this beat before...hot

Screwed doubles?...hmm...interesting

I'm not sure if I like that or not...but, it doesn't sound bad

your flow is good

quality is clear...

is this basically a call out/braggin type track?

lyrics aren't bad

slick sounding track bro


U have nice breast control



I mean BREATH!

hahaha

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Youtube Video for my song "CARRY ON"

Yea, i was messin wit a couple of things. I'm going to change some of the shit around i think. Thanks for the feed peeps. LOL @ breast control.

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Grim

*cough*............

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Grim

I like this track, very lyrical like always. You always deliver with dope lyrics. The beats are tight fa sure man, I was lovin this shit. The only point that's low would be your delivery, coulda been a bit more up but on the 2nd beat it was good. you seem to come out with confidence so thats good enough man. The overall track was tight I liked how you just went hard and lyrical with a dope flow. I dislike the effect you put on your dubs, but it's not a big problem. This track was ILL as fuck!

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You already know what I think...

lol Steve wants me to throw in here that your the black Johnny Cash (he thinks your like the best rapper ever, talk about a d/r)

Anyways, I was thinking of using that beat, but now I won't. You came tight, I liked it... Nice lyrics as usall... nice flow & delivery....

rtf if ya want...

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hahaha werd, thanks for the feedback...........uppin.........

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Grim

uppity..........................

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RTF

Beat is HARD... like the opra like vocals... singin in the backround...


damn... kid you dropin heat on this... Spoken word like dopeness.... the way you droppin this... its like you gotta spin it back to get it all... only thing... maybe a hook... nah... wait....

Damn.... Theres like a war goin on... LMAO.... Damn...


oh shit.... 2nd verse is comin in ... you got this dogg... "Shell shock only herts when its near you"


damn... i liked that Second beat a lot.... flames kiko you killed that shit...


9.5/10

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Full Metal Bronsky Dropin 1st Quarter 08'

ight man, thanks..............uppin..............

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Grim

nice beat here...this is some late night crusing shit....

nice lyrics fo sho......hard lines all through out this....good production its all ill

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