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05-16-06, 12:12 PM
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I don't lose
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IP: 6DBA 612A
dudes all pressed that i said i didnt know if i was gon have time like 3 days ago....n i aint say i freed all of it, and really how long does it take you to memorize shit, you hear it twice and you got it down....what i find funny is how only chi town heads come up in here and vote...let me see thats not bias at all, sayin 4/5 on flow when you fell off like 10 times at the begining....thats a fuckin joke man....stop buggin your home town buddies to check it out n vote for u
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05-16-06, 12:18 PM
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I don't lose
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IP: 6DBA 612A
word on the real tho. you got a nice beat but its hard to listen cuz you struggle with breating too much
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything so i took my old man's advice three sad semesters it was only fifteen grand spent in bed i thought about the army i dropped out and joined a band instead |
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05-16-06, 06:12 PM
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FuxJustAWord
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IP: FF5C 8D5B
only one person voted?????????
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05-17-06, 08:09 PM
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Ike
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IP: F5EA AA2D
Jay.......
never listened to you...but your not too bad...shits pretty good n stuff.....lemme break it down... intro...meh..nothing creative..just talking......kind of a waste of track space i thought.... flow and delivery is nice......but none of the punchlines are hard hitting or creative...i liked the john bobbet line....shit was pretty nice...other than the first couple of bars...there arent many personals... hmm...i thought the butthole line was wack man...no hate...but that brought the track down a lot.....i just didnt like it..... flow is good except for a few parts...where u mumble your words a lil bit...very few though...overall flow was nice... Overall...not a lot really stood out to me man.....the track was pretty good...i liked the beat n everything...but as far as a diss track...it was just ok...i think you could have been a lot more creative with the punches n shit..... teamone.....listening.....again intro just talking...but u got right to the point so it was ok... im loving the beat...shit is hard.... delivery is aright...flow is pretty good....i liked the switch gears shit....punchlines are decent....misdemeanor line is nice... overall....i felt like u had more creative punches.......although the track werent too far apart...i felt like your few creative punches got you the W..... VOTE: Teamone flow n delivery were about on the same level and i liked the beats about the same....but Fux had more creative punches throughout his verse.......
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05-17-06, 09:55 PM
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IP: 6DBA 612A
damn enygma was right, no one got the rock line....eh oh well
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything so i took my old man's advice three sad semesters it was only fifteen grand spent in bed i thought about the army i dropped out and joined a band instead |
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05-18-06, 11:22 PM
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O.wning Y.ou D.aily
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IP: BD13 7176
Winner - TeamOne
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