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Old 05-14-06, 10:32 AM   #1
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18. Mets (0-0) vs 19. Wicked One (0-0)

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Old 05-14-06, 11:10 AM   #2
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let's go lke 10-16.
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Old 05-15-06, 11:04 AM   #3
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16 Lines....check....
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Old 05-15-06, 09:30 PM   #4
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when im eatin, it's fair portions ..got the people scared for'him
cuz if they consider u a Pro 'Ked, they must put me equal to Air Jordans
its best that u step back ..when i fight, i never do wrong
n the way his neck'll snap..it could sue lil john for rights to his new song
im fuckin n touchin bitches, thats the rest of Mets' destination
this dudes only seein TNA ..when he watches that wrestlin federation
everyday he thinks whether or not he should drop, u just a joke to me bitch
but that shit has to be a Daly gamble, that'll leave him just as broke as he is
ladies said i look good son, then they said they couldnt fuck u kid
we took a poll n im not talkin the ten foot one they wouldnt touch u wit
n i feel like this league was a bad decision, i come n i help
i bring almost all the competition n i cant even get none for myself?
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12, match it.
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Old 05-15-06, 10:27 PM   #5
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I don't need coke or birds to floor this nerd with a dope verse...
Ya just checkin in but of course you were too excited to drop first...
Realizing you'll get smoked worse better skim thru that rap book...
Lately the only thing you're respected at is getting your ass whooped...
But this fag dresses in drag cuz he's really a penis lover...
Has been since his dad fucked him in the ass and made him eat the rubber...
Mets? your a fake, i know this skem, so your gettin purified by fire...
Bitch please, I spit lines that will exercise your ghostwriters...
You only sound dope to deaf mutes in sign language cyphers...
I leave your face burnt like trying to light joint roaches with crack lighters...
I wont never be slept on, like a pile of coke during an all nighter...
War with me is enternal, you'll never see peace like a freedom fighter...
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Old 05-15-06, 11:08 PM   #6
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Mets:

when im eatin, it's fair portions ..got the people scared for'him
cuz if they consider u a Pro 'Ked, they must put me equal to Air Jordans
^i get it... keds shoes... it was alright nothin' major
its best that u step back ..when i fight, i never do wrong
n the way his neck'll snap..it could sue lil john for rights to his new song
coo coo
im fuckin n touchin bitches, thats the rest of Mets' destination
this dudes only seein TNA ..when he watches that wrestlin federation
decent
everyday he thinks whether or not he should drop, u just a joke to me bitch
but that shit has to be a Daly gamble, that'll leave him just as broke as he is
word
ladies said i look good son, then they said they couldnt fuck u kid
we took a poll n im not talkin the ten foot one they wouldnt touch u wit
lol
n i feel like this league was a bad decision, i come n i help
i bring almost all the competition n i cant even get none for myself?
word

some coo ish.


Wicked One:


I don't need coke or birds to floor this nerd with a dope verse...
Ya just checkin in but of course you were too excited to drop first...
multi was off and u worded it wrong cause he DID drop first.
Realizing you'll get smoked worse better skim thru that rap book...
Lately the only thing you're respected at is getting your ass whooped...
cool flow and made me chuckle, but kinda stretched concept
But this fag dresses in drag cuz he's really a penis lover...
Has been since his dad fucked him in the ass and made him eat the rubber...
funny, good flow but there's no wordplay or punch here. just shit talk
Mets? your a fake, i know this skem, so your gettin purified by fire...
Bitch please, I spit lines that will exercise your ghostwriters...
blah. i get it. exorcism. pretty much anything involving ghostwriters is played
You only sound dope to deaf mutes in sign language cyphers...
I leave your face burnt like trying to light joint roaches with crack lighters...
no punch or wordplay. just violence talk
I wont never be slept on, like a pile of coke during an all nighter...
War with me is enternal, you'll never see peace like a freedom fighter...
seen it

decent. room for improvement but you've got the basics down. keep up

i felt like mets had harder punches. sooooo.....

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Old 05-16-06, 02:10 AM   #7
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its best that u step back ..when i fight, i never do wrong
n the way his neck'll snap..it could sue lil john for rights to his new song
im fuckin n touchin bitches, thats the rest of Mets' destination
this dudes only seein TNA ..when he watches that wrestlin federation
everyday he thinks whether or not he should drop, u just a joke to me bitch
but that shit has to be a Daly gamble, that'll leave him just as broke as he is
ladies said i look good son, then they said they couldnt fuck u kid
we took a poll n im not talkin the ten foot one they wouldnt touch u wit

vs.

But this fag dresses in drag cuz he's really a penis lover...
Has been since his dad fucked him in the ass and made him eat the rubber...

yea, this was easy. Mets clearly blew this out'a the water. came with better punches, wittier concepts and just being more consistant. wicked, ya was aiight. not much in ur verse but a nice flow. i think you can do better. think of morer wittier shit and stuff. easy win for mets.

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Old 05-16-06, 04:21 AM   #8
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vote- met killed someone
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Old 05-16-06, 10:36 AM   #9
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its best that u step back ..when i fight, i never do wrong
n the way his neck'll snap..it could sue lil john for rights to his new song
im fuckin n touchin bitches, thats the rest of Mets' destination
this dudes only seein TNA ..when he watches that wrestlin federation
everyday he thinks whether or not he should drop, u just a joke to me bitch
but that shit has to be a Daly gamble, that'll leave him just as broke as he is
ladies said i look good son, then they said they couldnt fuck u kid
we took a poll n im not talkin the ten foot one they wouldnt touch u wit

vs.

But this fag dresses in drag cuz he's really a penis lover...
Has been since his dad fucked him in the ass and made him eat the rubber...


Honestly, Wicked I've seen you do better... but still I don't think you would've had enough to take this battle even with your best. Mets just owned this battle, he had some dope punches and was just plain better. More consistent, made me laugh more with his verse and he pretty much blew Wicked away.

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Old 05-16-06, 11:05 AM   #10
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everyday he thinks whether or not he should drop, u just a joke to me bitch
but that shit has to be a Daly gamble, that'll leave him just as broke as he is
ladies said i look good son, then they said they couldnt fuck u kid
we took a poll n im not talkin the ten foot one they wouldnt touch u wit
n i feel like this league was a bad decision, i come n i help
i bring almost all the competition n i cant even get none for myself?
LAST HALF OF VERSE WAS REAL GOOD


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But this fag dresses in drag cuz he's really a penis lover...
Has been since his dad fucked him in the ass and made him eat the rubber...


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Old 05-16-06, 05:14 PM   #11
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everyday he thinks whether or not he should drop, u just a joke to me bitch
but that shit has to be a Daly gamble, that'll leave him just as broke as he is
ladies said i look good son, then they said they couldnt fuck u kid
we took a poll n im not talkin the ten foot one they wouldnt touch u wit
n i feel like this league was a bad decision, i come n i help
i bring almost all the competition n i cant even get none for myself?

Vs.

But this fag dresses in drag cuz he's really a penis lover...
Has been since his dad fucked him in the ass and made him eat the rubber...

ok battle, feel Mets came with more harder hittin punches... stay up...

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Old 05-16-06, 10:13 PM   #12
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its best that u step back ..when i fight, i never do wrong
n the way his neck'll snap..it could sue lil john for rights to his new song
ladies said i look good son, then they said they couldnt fuck u kid
we took a poll n im not talkin the ten foot one they wouldnt touch u wit
n i feel like this league was a bad decision, i come n i help
i bring almost all the competition n i cant even get none for myself?

vs.

nothing

omg, woulda been a cool battle, if wicked one dropped anything worth quoting.

v/mets
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Old 05-18-06, 12:09 PM   #13
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everyday he thinks whether or not he should drop, u just a joke to me bitch
but that shit has to be a Daly gamble, that'll leave him just as broke as he is
ladies said i look good son, then they said they couldnt fuck u kid
we took a poll n im not talkin the ten foot one they wouldnt touch u wit
n i feel like this league was a bad decision, i come n i help
i bring almost all the competition n i cant even get none for myself?

Vs

But this fag dresses in drag cuz he's really a penis lover...
Has been since his dad fucked him in the ass and made him eat the rubber...

V/mets took this easy it was onesided....he had a more consistent verse wit some fresh punchs
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Old 05-18-06, 08:30 PM   #14
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its best that u step back ..when i fight, i never do wrong
n the way his neck'll snap..it could sue lil john for rights to his new song
everyday he thinks whether or not he should drop, u just a joke to me bitch
but that shit has to be a Daly gamble, that'll leave him just as broke as he is
ladies said i look good son, then they said they couldnt fuck u kid
we took a poll n im not talkin the ten foot one they wouldnt touch u wit

VS

Nothing.

V./ mets.
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Old 05-20-06, 06:13 PM   #15
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vote- mets


im not quoting or explaining shit... this was cut and dry
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