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Old 05-18-06, 06:13 PM   #1
Dervla
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Dervla vs H.D.

IP: 554E CDC4

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Old 05-18-06, 06:32 PM   #2
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Old 05-19-06, 03:17 PM   #3
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From: Raven's Nest
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Astonished by my demolished achievements, change of seasons
Reason, stunned by the vastly immense lengths my enemies went
Can't beleive it, the great trails pasted for this tribulation
Tasks passed to set in stone struggling masses vindication
I led nations, bent on coruption, and power hoarding
Political mastermind devine, no regrets, or mourning
I watched it all, pulling strings puppeteer behind curtain
For certian, in full control of every soul across the globe
Godly my sight almighty, nothing on earth could rival me
I coulda cared less about some simpletons who try to be
On my level, state of existance, perfection personified
Meaning I couldn't even knock me off my pedestal if I tried
Or so I thought, I thought seven steps ahead of everyone else
Try to match wits with me and I'll harm everyone's health
I sat on high, throne saturated in blood, sweat, and bones
Shattered, scattered, and blood spattered around my palace
I drank from a heady chalice, and had a heart full of malice
I viewed the world in crimson, people were mere victims
Ponds, thinking tangible objects to be manipulated, played
My hate was all encompassing consuming all, small, and tall
With contempt I walked the path, no pup could match paws
I had an ever watchful gaze, like the lord of the ring
Caught up in the agonizing syphmony as tortured souls sing
I had my eyes closed, and I humming along, to the song
In a state of bliss, when my lips met a clinched fist
I looked up, what fucking dumb luck, got struck again
Metal this time, I lost a limb, flapping my stump like a fin
Then I see this assailent and she grins, "Now for my people we get a win"
Nooooooo
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