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Old 05-21-06, 02:33 PM   #1
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19. SPuL (0-0) vs 20. pictureperfect2 (0-0)

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Old 05-21-06, 05:59 PM   #2
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Old 05-21-06, 11:51 PM   #3
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good.... check in
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Old 05-24-06, 05:38 AM   #4
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droppin a lil early cuz imma be shwasted tomorrow night.,,, but yo dont vote if u dont get the personals.. and i dont know if sum of my concepts are played on him cuz i aint read his old battles.
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anyway... death to spul
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Boy put his heart in his tape… really needed ya face bro
Cuz the bitch aint got a hook half as memorable as ya nose yo
Wit that mug like that on ya cover good luck finding buyers
I mean Girls say n.o. to spul more than Katrina relief fliers
U aint got the appeal.. rhymes wack.. how’d u ever get hired
And I don’t know what your lable is but it better Be expired
Im disgusted with your raps.. every mufuckin word is fake
But whats new…
still bunch of shit we don’t care to hear’s in a commercial break
if I was you I’d ‘trade it all’ for ya own lyrics plus ya flow is ass
My punches leave spul such a reck that’s what he’s also know as
so let me finish chokin this bitch until his head pops out his eyes
just by windin thread around spul.. without any sewing supplies
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spool= spul

gl, we should go more lines next time
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Old 05-25-06, 04:08 AM   #5
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uppin for spuls verse
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Old 05-25-06, 03:08 PM   #6
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Old 05-25-06, 10:30 PM   #7
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bout time I battled this shit talker...

let's go....

you can call my nose huge, I'll diss it too. Kid, just for fun
Cuz I'm winning by a nose... and I'm talkin' bout my one
You can throw whatever at me, kid. I'm not one to mind the blizzards
I'll just throw-back Bullets to your chest, like the 90's Wizards
There's a long line to admire the greats, kid, take your spot
Cuz in real life you watching your weight, while in rap, you waiting to watch
This kid's the one to date a tranny. He's sick, but not talkin' flu
Cuz not only me.... even your girl own a pp2
Everyone's talent's going up, but your's goes down. It ran out
You should thank gravity, cuz if not for it, you'd stand out
this kid's a fag for going against me. My lines? Most of 'em dope
You drop heat? Guess that makes you the first dude who toasted his soap

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Old 05-25-06, 10:35 PM   #8
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Im disgusted with your raps.. every mufuckin word is fake
But whats new…
still bunch of shit we don’t care to hear’s in a commercial break
so let me finish chokin this bitch until his head pops out his eyes
just by windin thread around spul.. without any sewing supplies

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you can call my nose huge, I'll diss it too. Kid, just for fun
Cuz I'm winning by a nose... and I'm talkin' bout my one
This kid's the one to date a tranny. He's sick, but not talkin' flu
Cuz not only me.... even your girl own a pp2
this kid's a fag for going against me. My lines? Most of 'em dope
You drop heat? Guess that makes you the first dude who toasted his soap


Man, I fucking vote for Spul just for having the funniest homo line I've ever seen. Oh shit, that will be something I laugh at for a while. Also, the pp2 nameplay was decent and shit, and the fact that you dissed yourself... I give you props for that to. Picutre, you came better than I thought you would... frankly most of your past verses I've seen have been straight ass... this one was decent and had a couple of decent bars. Unfortunately... you didn't have as many quotables.. and you didn't have a more consistent verse. If you keep dropping bars like those two I quoted though you'll win more battles. They were nice.

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Old 05-25-06, 11:18 PM   #9
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o let me finish chokin this bitch until his head pops out his eyes
just by windin thread around spul.. without any sewing supplies

vs

you can call my nose huge, I'll diss it too. Kid, just for fun
Cuz I'm winning by a nose... and I'm talkin' bout my one
This kid's the one to date a tranny. He's sick, but not talkin' flu
Cuz not only me.... even your girl own a pp2
this kid's a fag for going against me. My lines? Most of 'em dope
You drop heat? Guess that makes you the first dude who toasted his soap

V/Spul this was a decent battle both came wit some fresh lines. Spul came wit a more consistent verse to me Better wordplay and personals...
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Old 05-26-06, 04:13 AM   #10
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good drop. that cuz not only me... even your girl own a pp2 line was sick... props to that one. but watch out i'll be killin kids in a week or two believe that.
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Old 05-26-06, 08:16 AM   #11
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Wit that mug like that on ya cover good luck finding buyers
I mean Girls say n.o. to spul more than Katrina relief fliers
if I was you I’d ‘trade it all’ for ya own lyrics plus ya flow is ass
My punches leave spul such a reck that’s what he’s also know as

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This kid's the one to date a tranny. He's sick, but not talkin' flu
Cuz not only me.... even your girl own a pp2
Everyone's talent's going up, but your's goes down. It ran out
You should thank gravity, cuz if not for it, you'd stand out
this kid's a fag for going against me. My lines? Most of 'em dope
You drop heat? Guess that makes you the first dude who toasted his soap

Actually this battle was pretty close...All the battles this week were mainly blow outs...Picture came out pretty good just didn't have enuff punch, wasn't hungry enuff for it. Spul you drop pretty nice, started off as if you were gonna lose, but you redeemed yourself at the end.

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Old 05-26-06, 08:56 AM   #12
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SPuL is winning 3-0. He fed a bar from picture's verse.
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Old 05-26-06, 10:11 AM   #13
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U aint got the appeal.. rhymes wack.. how’d u ever get hired
And I don’t know what your lable is but it better Be expired
Im disgusted with your raps.. every mufuckin word is fake
But whats new…
still bunch of shit we don’t care to hear’s in a commercial break


dope verse pp2, i seen you getting much better and i dig this verse
didnt dig the NO line cuz its been done, but you came solid





This kid's the one to date a tranny. He's sick, but not talkin' flu
Cuz not only me.... even your girl own a pp2
Everyone's talent's going up, but your's goes down. It ran out
You should thank gravity, cuz if not for it, you'd stand out
this kid's a fag for going against me. My lines? Most of 'em dope
You drop heat? Guess that makes you the first dude who toasted his soap


spul drops heat consistently so i m not suprised he still managed to out quote pp2
i gotta give the vote to him based on the solidity of his verse
but pp2 if you keep dropping like that, you'll come up

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Old 05-26-06, 12:52 PM   #14
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U aint got the appeal.. rhymes wack.. how’d u ever get hired
And I don’t know what your lable is but it better Be expired

vs

There's a long line to admire the greats, kid, take your spot
Cuz in real life you watching your weight, while in rap, you waiting to watch
this kid's a fag for going against me. My lines? Most of 'em dope
You drop heat? Guess that makes you the first dude who toasted his soap

Overated battle to be honest, the only really nice line was the soap one. I don't like Spuls wording but at least he's stopped with the 2003 layout. PP2 was let down by his wording which was innefective. Like the commerical break coulda been nice but his take on it was confusing and poorly executed.

V/ Spul
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Old 05-28-06, 03:07 AM   #15
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