J.Summers on first
Stanley Nelson on Second..

Droppin bodys

www.soundclick.com/jsummers its at the top

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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=228715
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=228620

dont sleep

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southbeachmiamiho

you would put my whole name on that shit....hahahahahahaha

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Hello everyone

c'mon with yo tired asses...............................

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southbeachmiamiho

Stutterin STANLEY!


lol


beat is bangin...makes me wanna get up and shake a tail feather!



1st person came in strong as hell

lol...not bad...but that voice threw me for a loop comin in that strong

nice intensity

"grill u like a piece of chicken"? ehh...not a strong line


like ur presence though


Like the hook


2nd cat...good flow...a lil more low-key


nice soundin track fellas



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southbeachmiamiho

beat is koo..first nigga was on some real dirty south type shit lol flow was koo tho..had a couple nice lines..2nd nigga sound like he gota lisp..nice flow tho..lyrics was there..both had a solid delivery..overall tha track is nice..keep it up

peep my shit one time
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=228845

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word word..thanks

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like how it came in..not my style but..is kinda cool...

came in iight...delevry is nice..as is emotion...flows cool n shit...crunk shit..grill like chicken line funny...hooks iigh
but it gets old fast..

2nd dude come in nice...flows nice..emotion n presence their...lyrics not bad...delevery is what stands out here though...

yeah...hooks real old now..

not bad guys

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HELLLZ YEEAHH !!!!

word.............................................. .........and it dont mean shit...i'm bout to bust clips.. you lookin at me while i'm lookin right at your bitch (shear kaughn)

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southbeachmiamiho

aiight im going to drop some feedback on this joint cuz im fuckin feelin this joint

first dude

energy is crazy...the voice is aiight...i dont like all that screaming shit but it fits this kinda track.....the lyrics is pretty good..good for this track anywayz....the pressence is good aswell...the flow is good.....basic lyrics ...but what else u gon do on this kinda track. nice verse homie i was feelin dis....no quotables....but shit keep at it

7.1/10

chorus/beat

the chorus is SICKKK...damn this is something i would hop on...this shits crazy im feelin this too def..the beat is sick..im likin the keyboard in the background...nice shit.....good find

2nd verse

now this is hot..straight up....i saw your name and saw the apu in your sig i thjought u was a stupid ass or soemthing..but this track is sick yo. fo real. nice shit...the flow is hot for this track...the pressence is good and the energy is right for this track......the lyrics is good and u ride the beat better then the first dude..hot shit yo....the voice is good for this track aswell

7.6/10


overall 7.2/10 hot track

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where u get this beat and chorus from?

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AHH I Was Gonna Use That Beat..Prolly Still Will...but on to the feed..

1st Guy

Seems Really Southern style type ish , i like it but that Bow Wow Line just killed it...in a good way...i would prolly bump this some of the lines are kinda played though and you prolly could have improved alittle on the lyrics..but for what it is its pretty nice..came in strong went out a little less hungrey but still pretty nice..

2nd Guy
Whoa...this guy comes in nice, lyrics are straight for what they are...Really for some reason i find you outshining the first guy, maybe its just ya presense and ya delivery is pretty nice...that Fucking with his mother line was nice...overall nice flow, better part of the two but overall a pretty good track...

7.8/10 a good clubbish track.

RTF - On Broken..

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iGhostwrite Mixtape DL

1st cat is J. Summers

2nd cat...Stanley Nelson...aka...Shear Kaughn...

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Oh k k kaaaay the beats fiya
waitin for the lyrics....annnnnnnd
woooooah lol kinda suprised me there calm down cutty
was that just a Lil Bow Wow line?.....hmmmm

2nd guy....waiting....1st guy hurry up....
ahhh you sounds like a pissed of Sluggsworth shut up

finally 2nd guy....better....lol pronounciation what's up with that
nigga took 1 too many english classes have a little swagger for christ sakes

......yeeeah i'm feeling him though kinda reminds me of Young Buck
maybe cus Buck's on the hook ....but meh this tracks iight

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