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oh snap, rematch from week before last. good luck son

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=229371
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=229370
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=229374
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...6856post2766856

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man, fuck i don't even feel like droppin' for this cat again. no motivation AT ALL. fuck i'ma jus do 2-4 lines. ehh

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this battles ganna get grimmy so let me get shit real gritty
and i'd lace u with punches, but u'd wanna try wearin it to look pretty
u got ya ass whooped last week.. givin me more time for parties and clubs
cuz now i don't have to steal paul walls car for u to get run over by dubs
im nothin like this homo.. keepin distance from the queer isn't a big task
i get rinsed off from my shower head.. yours gets u expelled from gym class
now if i was as ugly as you i'd kill myself.. so check this bitch
and although your not suicidal.. i bet whoever u have sex with is

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blah.. i don't even feel motivated for this shit, less then 2 min spit. yes, some of it might be incredibly wack, but guess what..... I DONT GIVE A FUCK!!!!! YEA!!!!!!!


yo yo yo, homie dog, I'ma leave this faggot done
Sending punches to his frame <--- while this picture just stuck behind one
First you praisin' my spits, but now you talkin' that shit
So how can we go face to face.... if you be down on my dick?
all your shit's played. Be original, god damn!
Yea, your punches are money... they been in everybody's hands!
My flow is hot like chemo therapy, so you go and figure
I'll leave you bald, lmao, like Charles Barkely nigga!

WOOOO!!!!!!!!!!

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yo yo yo, homie dog, I'ma leave this faggot done
Sending punches to his frame <--- while this picture just stuck behind one

Well SPuL said it whack but he did just enuff to edge this one out...No more explanations

Vote - SPuL

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OK, I am only breaking this verse from picture down because I really do think you have the potential to be dope, but you ain't quite there yet.


this battles ganna get grimmy so let me get shit real gritty
and i'd lace u with punches, but u'd wanna try wearin it to look pretty
First of all, the setup just comes across as filler to me... if you can make it so that it has relevance to the punchline you're half way to a dope punch. Although, it doesn't always have to be relevant... it can sometimes just be a simple "I'm know to kill cats...blah blah..." kind of setup. Then, with that punchline, the lace u with punches concept is decent, but then you worded it too basic and it came across as less affective. You need to be coming creative and flipping that shit hot.
u got ya ass whooped last week.. givin me more time for parties and clubs
cuz now i don't have to steal paul walls car for u to get run over by dubs
The wording again could be better... the setup was relevant.. so good for doing that and the punch was pretty good, although dubs/daubs... they aint the same, nor are they pronounced the same... so for this idea to work it would have to be forced to fuck or worded spectacularly.
im nothin like this homo.. keepin distance from the queer isn't a big task
i get rinsed off from my shower head.. yours gets u expelled from gym class
I didn't like this... the wording threw me off. The shower head concept could've been used so much better...I don't know how you work your punches, but if you don't already then you should try flipping the concept a few different ways before settling on a punch.
now if i was as ugly as you i'd kill myself.. so check this bitch
and although your not suicidal.. i bet whoever u have sex with is
The concept wasn't all that good... but with a better flip and wording it could've been decent. Again, you took it and worded it too basic as if you couldn't be fucked with trying to be creative.


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yo yo yo, homie dog, I'ma leave this faggot done
Sending punches to his frame <--- while this picture just stuck behind one
Blah, this was weak...
First you praisin' my spits, but now you talkin' that shit
So how can we go face to face.... if you be down on my dick?
Fucking trash..
all your shit's played. Be original, god damn!
Yea, your punches are money... they been in everybody's hands!
Shit wording...
My flow is hot like chemo therapy, so you go and figure
I'll leave you bald, lmao, like Charles Barkely nigga!
Wow, trash..


SPuL dropped fucking gay. The opener was the only thing worth reading and I don't give a fuck how other people will vote... but I am giving this battle to Picture. SPuL's verse was like the gay shit TeamOne pulled last week by not trying and just dropping utter garbage. And you know this ain't hate... 'coz me and spul are cool and shit and I'm cool with picture. I think picture has a lot of potential... he just needs to put more thought into his punches, get more creative and seriously work on the wording. Spul, you really are a fucking idiot for purposely dropping such a gay verse.

V/ - pictureperfect2

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this battles ganna get grimmy so let me get shit real gritty
and i'd lace u with punches, but u'd wanna try wearin it to look pretty

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yo yo yo, homie dog, I'ma leave this faggot done
Sending punches to his frame <--- while this picture just stuck behind one
First you praisin' my spits, but now you talkin' that shit
So how can we go face to face.... if you be down on my dick?

v/SPuL

k? K!

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word, good lookin nick for the detailed response......

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2-1 uppppppppppp

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yo yo yo, homie dog, I'ma leave this faggot done
Sending punches to his frame <--- while this picture just stuck behind one

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now if i was as ugly as you i'd kill myself.. so check this bitch
and although your not suicidal.. i bet whoever u have sex with is
this battles ganna get grimmy so let me get shit real gritty
and i'd lace u with punches, but u'd wanna try wearin it to look pretty
^^even tho it could have been worded MUCH better...

very meh battle, spul didnt seem to give a shit, and I got picture edgin it out here with slighly better punches... much respect to both emcees...

vote- Picture

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kickin dem dumb cuts, ill put a foot in yuh, sucka
N you kno im on tha come up, so look for muh, bruva

this battles ganna get grimmy so let me get shit real gritty
and i'd lace u with punches, but u'd wanna try wearin it to look pretty

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yo yo yo, homie dog, I'ma leave this faggot done
Sending punches to his frame <--- while this picture just stuck behind one
First you praisin' my spits, but now you talkin' that shit
So how can we go face to face.... if you be down on my dick?

Vote - SPuL....only just though

"only just though"... the fuck?

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