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Old 06-07-06, 04:39 PM   #1
Jay Rose
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Talking IM A BOSS.....Leave Links, ill return favor....hot song from jay n tony self

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1st verse - Jay 286
2nd verse - Tony Self
hooks - well ill let you decide
3rd is back n forth.....dont sleep on this song...


Im A Boss - http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=4035188


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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=229541
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Old 06-07-06, 04:50 PM   #2
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Yeah!

this beat is dope....

Jay

Your flows dope man,i think vocals should be upped a lil....deliverys dope,word to your emotion..damn this is dope man...lovin how you presenting your voice,real nice,dope presence...dope shit..dope lyrics,word to your voice

Hooks dope...like how you changed it

Tony.....
Word flows nice,feelin ya lyrics...good delivery feelin it,this shits dope yo,nice emotion..presnece is dope,really feelin this man..good verse yo

Hook..................

Aight...third verse
Jay-like your flow on this verse,real nice it suits the melody bit....nice shit
Tony-yeah real nice too,feelin your delivery on it...good shit

Talkin...Part of the hook

Word up dope song...downloadin this ish
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Old 06-07-06, 05:20 PM   #3
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alright..lets check it...

1st cat...flowin good...i like the beat..me and j used it a while back.....ummm good presece...vocals could be upped yes...they sound to hollow...need to be upped

2nd cat....he flowin good to.......good lyics...delivery real nice as well...lyrics could be upped here to.....

yalls hook is alright....nothing bangin...but its cool......
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Old 06-07-06, 08:39 PM   #4
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gracias unf drop links....n i think ive already hit you up kahn....i unno uppin
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high
and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything
so i took my old man's advice
three sad semesters
it was only fifteen grand spent in bed
i thought about the army
i dropped out and joined a band instead


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Old 06-08-06, 04:33 AM   #5
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Old 06-08-06, 04:45 PM   #6
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tony self as himself? then, who are you coming as?

hmmm

beat is slick

vocals need to be upped some...

likin the flow/delivery action jay...it works for the track

lyrics aren't out of the ordinary one way or the other

like that rhyming sequences

hook sounds slick...but, I can't hear some of it...



Tony...ur delivery on the hook reminded me of biggie...verse is flowin nicely


solid drop fellas


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Old 06-09-06, 12:31 AM   #7
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^^^feed apreciated
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Old 06-09-06, 01:09 AM   #8
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tony, that sig is the illness.....
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high
and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything
so i took my old man's advice
three sad semesters
it was only fifteen grand spent in bed
i thought about the army
i dropped out and joined a band instead


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Old 06-09-06, 10:26 PM   #9
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upppin like woah
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high
and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything
so i took my old man's advice
three sad semesters
it was only fifteen grand spent in bed
i thought about the army
i dropped out and joined a band instead


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Old 06-11-06, 12:09 AM   #10
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well at least i liked this song...uppin for more views
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high
and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything
so i took my old man's advice
three sad semesters
it was only fifteen grand spent in bed
i thought about the army
i dropped out and joined a band instead


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Old 06-14-06, 12:10 AM   #11
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one slept on joint right here
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Old 06-14-06, 12:24 AM   #12
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i agree.......... :/
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high
and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything
so i took my old man's advice
three sad semesters
it was only fifteen grand spent in bed
i thought about the army
i dropped out and joined a band instead


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Old 06-16-06, 06:31 PM   #13
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up to the top mayneeeeeeeeeee
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high
and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything
so i took my old man's advice
three sad semesters
it was only fifteen grand spent in bed
i thought about the army
i dropped out and joined a band instead


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Old 06-17-06, 01:08 AM   #14
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disturbing lack of feed on a hott track
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