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06-15-06, 08:22 PM | #1 | |||||||
inFAMOUS
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First Track, Dont Hate.
IP: 5043 32F4
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Last edited by TitoBronsky : 06-16-06 at 09:09 AM. |
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06-15-06, 08:38 PM | #2 | ||||
O.wning Y.ou D.aily
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IP: F8C9 295D
*listening*
Wow....are you sure you paid the full $5.00 for the mic? You should have saved the money and bought some skills....lol. Just kidding man. Your flow's just not there man.....you're trying to fit too many words in your lines and end up just mumbling. Quality is complete ass, but I figured you knew that already......just read some tutorials, cause you can probably get some listenable quality out of your cheap ass mic....
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06-15-06, 08:39 PM | #3 | ||||
what dat be...
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IP: 5021 8C8D
it was aight for ur first drop ur hook coulda been better and ur mic quality coulda been a lot better but it was a ok song work on the flow and lyrics...
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06-15-06, 08:42 PM | #4 | |||||||
inFAMOUS
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IP: 5043 32F4
well it wasent 5 dollars exactly.. ahaha more like 4.75 or sumshit |
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06-15-06, 08:51 PM | #5 | |||||||
Broke as hell
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IP: B8B4 D1AE
i'd have to say that hte quality took my by surprise...but its all good man...ima post up my first track up hahaha we can bet a laugh..but....anyway...you got good flow for a first timer...need to slow it down a bit...stay with the beat....your runnign to fast man.....lyrics are good...you got that downpacked.....
only things that need to be upped is flow....and quality.... good first drop
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06-16-06, 12:05 AM | #6 | |||||||
inFAMOUS
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IP: 5043 32F4
ahaha ye i rushed on this shit man everyone left...for like half an hour so i had to do it quick |
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06-16-06, 02:20 AM | #7 | ||||
L.E
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IP: BEF6 4DB8
Listening...
I like the beat... Wow at the fucking quality...Lmfao... Hook wasn't as bad I thought it would it be... Verse...Flow is very rushed...it's abrely on beat...wasn't feelin the flow at all. Delivery was monotonous but, it's not too terribly low. That quality is abosutely terrible though. It ruins the whole track. Read my tutorial about using shitty mics. |
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