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Old 07-01-06, 11:01 PM   #1
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^^the Song

Aight Its a song I put together today... I wrote it in a half-hour and just got done with it...

Word up

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Beat-Jedi Mind Tricks - Animal Rap(remix)INSTRUMENTAL

word too your mother

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Old 07-02-06, 12:56 AM   #2
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Old 07-02-06, 04:31 AM   #3
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first off.

your my hoe.
Now to your little jingle you have here.


I shall be using this beat.....intros ok... quality is good.... lyrics are cool, flows good....nice switch ups in this.... good concept on this track..

hook after your first verse I can hear what sounds like a mic turning off.

Second verse is cool, lyrics come a bit more simplistic, flow stays on.

Decent track bro.
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Old 07-02-06, 12:16 PM   #4
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always loved this beat....

come in's nice....flows straight...delevery is tight,seems like ur gona come into a bit of a story...hope thats where ur going ...food fight line was ehhh....best thing here was the message n shit...u made ur point clear....coulda been wrote a bit better IMO....not bad thjo
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Old 07-02-06, 04:25 PM   #5
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yeah that second verse was off....thef irst vers was perfect tho...second i just iono didn't feel it cuz i kept gettin interuppted..but word too your mother

and thanks

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Old 07-02-06, 10:13 PM   #6
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*listening*

intro is... Past Tense lol

flow is on point on this beat, you hit it well... nice first verse
hook is... well, not much feed to leave about that lol

rest of the song is like the first verse, very nice storytellin kinda theme to it, im feelin this track from you as usual...
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