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That Old School Mother Fucker

Aint That A Bitch?

Crhyme Sindicate

yup.
......................

who the fuck?..

RV oughta be ashamed. son's bad for our health
your the worst on aboard. . the damn plank walked itself
yeah, kid's in the spotlight. out of nowhere he pulled defeats
button reality you'll never bring together a decent streak
you put us to sleep. best believe im endin your tenure
shit RV really cleaned up its act. .the way noone repeat offender
hit him where its tender. u'll be bruised from this bashing
and you'll get a kick outta this. . once your layed out, Laughing
why bother rapping? after you read this you'll just go and hide
you'll still see your name in the mag. . for my no show shine
just pushed aside. you aint a star, i passed astronomy
cause i'll leave O zoned out so much its bad for the economy
theres no stopping me. u've got no way to gauge this blow
shit, you stole your style from kids i sonned ages ago
you'll look deformed after this. they'll ask whats that dude on?
n i'd take liberty to your beating. .
. . . but people'd complain the statues gone
im mashing you son. its what happens when i brew steam
trust ill have this 1-at (2-1).. by the way go peep my new league
go 'head and feed. your straight ass, dont reply kid
i just wanna know hows it feel to be dissed by an advertisement?
dont fight it. what kinda name do you have and why even rock it?
only the 3rd letter makes sense. . cause you repeatedly drop it
the win is locked kid. i can just repeat filler for any reason
cause you drop lines about as meaningful as NFL's preseason
this is me leavin. quit asking for help so much kid
after this the only support you'll get is from crutches

26.. match it

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That Old School Mother Fucker

Aint That A Bitch?

Crhyme Sindicate

im not even gon try. cuz once i beat u and win
i know you'd turn around n use ur mod powers to cheat again

.

aight, lets get it started bitch.

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a tomb, casket, hearse, and urn..so this week'll be busy..
cuz im dropping I's in 4 places, like spelling mississippi
faggot thinks he came fresh. dudes should run n hide.
cuz he attempted every Ass angle..played nameplays aside.
L, ur not on my level. i always succeed
bein dope is in my nature, and youre just a seed.
indeed. the site knows that ur rep is shrinking.
and i dont hafta bomb the island to see that Ellis sinking
after that verse, hell, i'll help u advertise to ease the tension
cuz after readin it, i saw bout 1-2 punches thats maybe worth mentionin
bitch, ur not takin the win. im passin ranks
cuz its about to be Laughin time..like ur rapping acts
Off is dope. pimps bitches. every girl is gettin caught
so when u hear im Off in ya girl..its no assassination plots
yeah, u talk a good game. L.I. dropped tight n fast
but im not surprised..
most fags usually do when its about My Ass
recyclin punches, its true. L's a whodini artist
plucking lines here n there like rookie guitarists
ya got a big mouth, but after i bruise with the hittin..
i'll leave I's wide shut..like cruise and kidman
kid aint straight. he's masqueradin. this kid did u wrong
cuz ive never seen a more queer I..since the fuckin sitcom
ya streaks gone. last punch and u'll be rocked kid
with broken tissues that resemble defective kleenex boxes

.

elevate fucka.

you put us to sleep. best believe im endin your tenure
shit RV really cleaned up its act. .the way noone repeat offender
just pushed aside. you aint a star, i passed astronomy
cause i'll leave O zoned out so much its bad for the economy
im mashing you son. its what happens when i brew steam
trust ill have this 1-at (2-1).. by the way go peep my new league
go 'head and feed. your straight ass, dont reply kid
i just wanna know hows it feel to be dissed by an advertisement?
dont fight it. what kinda name do you have and why even rock it?
only the 3rd letter makes sense. . cause you repeatedly drop it


Vs.


L, ur not on my level. i always succeed
bein dope is in my nature, and youre just a seed.
indeed. the site knows that ur rep is shrinking.
and i dont hafta bomb the island to see that Ellis sinking
Off is dope. pimps bitches. every girl is gettin caught
so when u hear im Off in ya girl..its no assassination plots
recyclin punches, its true. L's a whodini artist
plucking lines here n there like rookie guitarists
ya got a big mouth, but after i bruise with the hittin..
i'll leave I's wide shut..like cruise and kidman



Well i saw 5 quoatables from each, so ima go to the rest of the verses to judge this one.


L.I.:

RV oughta be ashamed. son's bad for our health
your the worst on aboard. . the damn plank walked itself
^^i liked this bar but i didnt feel it was qoutable as the concept is played
yeah, kid's in the spotlight. out of nowhere he pulled defeats
button reality you'll never bring together a decent streak
^^decent wordplay but the punch wasnt effective
hit him where its tender. u'll be bruised from this bashing
and you'll get a kick outta this. . once your layed out, Laughing
^^good nameplay, alright punch
why bother rapping? after you read this you'll just go and hide
you'll still see your name in the mag. . for my no show shine
^^wack
theres no stopping me. u've got no way to gauge this blow
shit, you stole your style from kids i sonned ages ago
^^wack
you'll look deformed after this. they'll ask whats that dude on?
n i'd take liberty to your beating. .
. . . but people'd complain the statues gone
^^wasnt feelin this. alright concept though
the win is locked kid. i can just repeat filler for any reason
cause you drop lines about as meaningful as NFL's preseason
^^not really
this is me leavin. quit asking for help so much kid
after this the only support you'll get is from crutches
^^played


Vs.


LMAOffender:

im not even gon try. cuz once i beat u and win
i know you'd turn around n use ur mod powers to cheat again
^^allright personal, wasnt feelin it much
a tomb, casket, hearse, and urn..so this week'll be busy..
cuz im dropping I's in 4 places, like spelling mississippi
^^once again not feelin it and mississippi bars are played
faggot thinks he came fresh. dudes should run n hide.
cuz he attempted every Ass angle..played nameplays aside.
^^this was ok
after that verse, hell, i'll help u advertise to ease the tension
cuz after readin it, i saw bout 1-2 punches thats maybe worth mentionin
^^stretched and wack
bitch, ur not takin the win. im passin ranks
cuz its about to be Laughin time..like ur rapping acts
^^doesnt rhyme
yeah, u talk a good game. L.I. dropped tight n fast
but im not surprised..
most fags usually do when its about My Ass
^^wack
kid aint straight. he's masqueradin. this kid did u wrong
cuz ive never seen a more queer I..since the fuckin sitcom
^^this was a good bar didnt feel it was quotable tho.
ya streaks gone. last punch and u'll be rocked kid
with broken tissues that resemble defective kleenex boxes
^^no


OK so after all that L.I had about 4 other bars that were alright and LMAOffender had about 3.

So therefore i gotta go with L.I

Dont take this as a hate vote becuase i guarantee others will see this battle as close and the votes will be split between both of you but in my opinion L.I won


Vote: L.I

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RV's Only 3 Time Topical Tourney Champion

Well ...

im not even gon try. cuz once i beat u and win
i know you'd turn around n use ur mod powers to cheat again
...LOL...

aight, lets get it started bitch.

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a tomb, casket, hearse, and urn..so this week'll be busy..
cuz im dropping I's in 4 places, like spelling mississippi
...Decent...
faggot thinks he came fresh. dudes should run n hide.
cuz he attempted every Ass angle..played nameplays aside.
...Meh!..
L, ur not on my level. i always succeed
bein dope is in my nature, and youre just a seed.
...Weak...
indeed. the site knows that ur rep is shrinking.
and i dont hafta bomb the island to see that Ellis sinking
...Nice...
after that verse, hell, i'll help u advertise to ease the tension
cuz after readin it, i saw bout 1-2 punches thats maybe worth mentionin
...Meh..
bitch, ur not takin the win. im passin ranks
cuz its about to be Laughin time..like ur rapping acts
..Didnt Rhyme man
Off is dope. pimps bitches. every girl is gettin caught
so when u hear im Off in ya girl..its no assassination plots
....Nice wordplay...
yeah, u talk a good game. L.I. dropped tight n fast
but im not surprised..
most fags usually do when its about My Ass
...LOL Damn...
recyclin punches, its true. L's a whodini artist
plucking lines here n there like rookie guitarists
...Good...
ya got a big mouth, but after i bruise with the hittin..
i'll leave I's wide shut..like cruise and kidman
...I Get it...
kid aint straight. he's masqueradin. this kid did u wrong
cuz ive never seen a more queer I..since the fuckin sitcom
....LOl Decent and funny...
ya streaks gone. last punch and u'll be rocked kid
with broken tissues that resemble defective kleenex boxes
...Good Wordplay...

vs.

RV oughta be ashamed. son's bad for our health
your the worst on aboard. . the damn plank walked itself
..LOL....
yeah, kid's in the spotlight. out of nowhere he pulled defeats
button reality you'll never bring together a decent streak
......Decent...
you put us to sleep. best believe im endin your tenure
shit RV really cleaned up its act. .the way noone repeat offender
..Damn I didnt get that at first I had to read it twice...
hit him where its tender. u'll be bruised from this bashing
and you'll get a kick outta this. . once your layed out, Laughing
...Good...
why bother rapping? after you read this you'll just go and hide
you'll still see your name in the mag. . for my no show shine
...Decent...
just pushed aside. you aint a star, i passed astronomy
cause i'll leave O zoned out so much its bad for the economy
....LOL Nice wordplay ...
theres no stopping me. u've got no way to gauge this blow
shit, you stole your style from kids i sonned ages ago
...Decent...
you'll look deformed after this. they'll ask whats that dude on?
n i'd take liberty to your beating. .
. . . but people'd complain the statues gone
....Decent...
im mashing you son. its what happens when i brew steam
trust ill have this 1-at (2-1).. by the way go peep my new league
...WTF are you advertising lol...
go 'head and feed. your straight ass, dont reply kid
i just wanna know hows it feel to be dissed by an advertisement?
...That Answers my Question...
dont fight it. what kinda name do you have and why even rock it?
only the 3rd letter makes sense. . cause you repeatedly drop it
...Oh I Had to Read That twice NICE..
the win is locked kid. i can just repeat filler for any reason
cause you drop lines about as meaningful as NFL's preseason
...LOL....
this is me leavin. quit asking for help so much kid
after this the only support you'll get is from crutches
...Damn...

Overall I was thinkin that LMAO was gonna come over LI and Do Somethin Serious when I read both verses my mind was made up and I have given my v/

LI

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*Bridging The Rap*

Stanza Productions *Dem City Boys*

LI

RV oughta be ashamed. son's bad for our health
your the worst on aboard. . the damn plank walked itself
str8 punch..kinda comical
yeah, kid's in the spotlight. out of nowhere he pulled defeats
button reality you'll never bring together a decent streak
good wordplay
you put us to sleep. best believe im endin your tenure
shit RV really cleaned up its act. .the way noone repeat offender
decent nameplay
hit him where its tender. u'll be bruised from this bashing
and you'll get a kick outta this. . once your layed out, Laughing
LOL...yeah...I get it...
why bother rapping? after you read this you'll just go and hide
you'll still see your name in the mag. . for my no show shine
wasn't feeling this bar really
just pushed aside. you aint a star, i passed astronomy
cause i'll leave O zoned out so much its bad for the economy
decent punch
theres no stopping me. u've got no way to gauge this blow
shit, you stole your style from kids i sonned ages ago
Self Glorifications and the punch was a bit played
you'll look deformed after this. they'll ask whats that dude on?
n i'd take liberty to your beating. .
. . . but people'd complain the statues gone
good wordplay but hardly a punch
im mashing you son. its what happens when i brew steam
trust ill have this 1-at (2-1).. by the way go peep my new league
wtf?....
go 'head and feed. your straight ass, dont reply kid
i just wanna know hows it feel to be dissed by an advertisement?
ohhhh....okay.....
dont fight it. what kinda name do you have and why even rock it?
only the 3rd letter makes sense. . cause you repeatedly drop it
Lol...my fave punch so far...
the win is locked kid. i can just repeat filler for any reason
cause you drop lines about as meaningful as NFL's preseason
ehhh
this is me leavin. quit asking for help so much kid
after this the only support you'll get is from crutches
decent closer...



LMAOffender

a tomb, casket, hearse, and urn..so this week'll be busy..
cuz im dropping I's in 4 places, like spelling mississippi
Good word and nameplay
faggot thinks he came fresh. dudes should run n hide.
cuz he attempted every Ass angle..played nameplays aside.
decent punch
L, ur not on my level. i always succeed
bein dope is in my nature, and youre just a seed.
not that good
indeed. the site knows that ur rep is shrinking.
and i dont hafta bomb the island to see that Ellis sinking
wak
after that verse, hell, i'll help u advertise to ease the tension
cuz after readin it, i saw bout 1-2 punches thats maybe worth mentionin
Good personal I guess
bitch, ur not takin the win. im passin ranks
cuz its about to be Laughin time..like ur rapping acts
Wak
Off is dope. pimps bitches. every girl is gettin caught
so when u hear im Off in ya girl..its no assassination plots
wak
yeah, u talk a good game. L.I. dropped tight n fast
but im not surprised..
most fags usually do when its about My Ass
wtf? this is gay on so many levels
recyclin punches, its true. L's a whodini artist
plucking lines here n there like rookie guitarists
wak
ya got a big mouth, but after i bruise with the hittin..
i'll leave I's wide shut..like cruise and kidman
decent but not good
kid aint straight. he's masqueradin. this kid did u wrong
cuz ive never seen a more queer I..since the fuckin sitcom
ok nameplay
ya streaks gone. last punch and u'll be rocked kid
with broken tissues that resemble defective kleenex boxes
wak

This battle was another good one with both sides droping some decent shit...anything pass 20 lines is a waist of fucking time man. really... but either way...LMAO had a lot good and weird lines...But then half way through I felt like he was just dropping what ever and started losing hype... L.I. Had the best punch in the battle and was more off and on with his punches but came more direct in his verse

V/ L.I.


RTF in my battle with PP2

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figure I could drop by and promote my my first mixtape and what not since im here..

up over no-shows

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L.I. wins 3-0

L.I. (3-0)

LMAOffender (2-1)

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